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A Masterpiece

A young poet blossomed to a beautiful flower She created stunning views untouched by others Beautifully written Astounding many readers Impressive views Fascination for colors A master of her own crafted style Bestowed the highest of honor in creating her own masterpiece taken from comments and turned it to poetry 9/9/12

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2013 11:51:00 AM

Creative way to go..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/17/2013 4:41:00 PM

This is very beautiful. a young poet was born. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2012 10:09:00 PM

wonderfully clever Phyl .. astonishing how u could create such beauty from comments luv .. sorry for late reply to sm but my youngest son and his wife home from military till holidays over .. r expecting baby 9/22 so we r all so excited now .. so great to have the glowing lovebirds home for a while.. how r u luv?

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/12/2012 4:07:00 PM

Your wearing your pride on your sleeve.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/12/2012 4:15:00 PM

I have come a long way since I first started writing and I am honored the above comments were made to me from fellow poets

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/11/2012 1:37:00 PM

Are you the poetess in the poem? Interesting take on writing. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/12/2012 4:03:00 PM

this was taken from comments made to me. I thought it was a unique idea

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/10/2012 3:57:00 PM

what a very clever and enthraling idea, Phyllis. this is sheer magic:

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/12/2012 4:03:00 PM

thanks Harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/10/2012 12:37:00 PM

enthralling me no end, phyllis... a great creative angle!..:) huggs!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/12/2012 4:04:00 PM

thanks nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2012 6:56:00 AM

what an imaginative way to write a new poem, Phyllis. WOW!!!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/12/2012 4:04:00 PM

thanks for the comments will be home on the weekend

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/9/2012 6:26:00 PM

Keep going Phyll...Light & love

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/12/2012 4:05:00 PM

thanks Deb

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2012 2:07:00 PM

Yes, it's true Phyllis - many examples of that here. Very well written. Have a lovely Sunday afternoon. / / Hug Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/12/2012 4:06:00 PM

thanks Anne Lise it is a warm Tue here in Saskatoon but around home they are forecasting our first frost. Good that I cleared my garden off on the weekend;

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/9/2012 12:47:00 PM

Such beauty throughout!! Lovely.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/12/2012 4:06:00 PM

thanks Michael