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A Magical Touch

If you touch a thing often, it will shine And things live with love, gets a new life If you touch them every day. Yoga combines both physical And spiritual touch Giving a new life To catharsis Of body, Mind and Self. Feel No love Without touch. Touch Guitar's strings Music is produced. A poet touches words Inspired by thoughts and feelings To scribe a poem of delight. Strong air produced sound of tree branches The things touched with love ought to have a voice. +++ September 10, 2014 Form: Etheree (85 words – 110 syllables) First Place win Contest:Double Reverse Etheree by Shadow Hamilton

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Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 4:59:00 AM

Amazing

Hija De La Luna

Date: 10/4/2014 10:47:00 AM

beautiful etheree, Dr. Ram! Congratulations!

Margaret Foster

Date: 10/4/2014 4:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this fine verse, it was a pleasure to read.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/4/2014 3:56:00 AM

Congrats Dr. ,no wonder you keep on touching me that one day I will get poetic voice.Thank you Sir.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2014 11:43:00 PM

this one is very deserving of a first place, Dr. Ram. Big congrats to you.

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/3/2014 11:02:00 PM

Ram this is such a good read, congrats....Seren

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/3/2014 9:14:00 PM

Really loving and wise thoughts you have produced on the virtue of touch.. Congratulations. .

Joseph May

Date: 10/3/2014 8:56:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Dr Ram

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/3/2014 8:25:00 PM

This lovely poem has been touched with your heart and carries a beautiful message. Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.

Faye Gibson

Date: 10/3/2014 8:20:00 PM

Oh, I do like this one. Congrats, Dr. Ram.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/3/2014 6:52:00 PM

very wise words Ram delightful poem congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 10/4/2014 2:07:00 AM

Thanks, Shadow for the appreciation of my poem

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2014 6:32:00 PM

wonderful write Dr Mehta, I too love the last line:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2014 10:31:00 PM

wow, you did great with this one, Dr. Ram. Very well crafted double etheree. I love its message.

Robin Davis

Date: 9/14/2014 7:36:00 AM

Dr. Ram These words are so splendidly written and full of joy and sweetness.. Love in any form is the best thing we can give from our hearts. Thank you for the great comment on my Burning Pain poem.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/10/2014 6:22:00 PM

Looks like a hard form to write but your write made it look easy. You never broke the flow and the feel carried all the way from start to finish.. Bravo!! I am giving this one a top 7 rating.. Good luck in the contest..

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/10/2014 4:33:00 PM

Dr. Ram; I really liked this poem. The magical touch of love will always work. Good luck in the contest... Lucilla

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/10/2014 11:10:00 AM

Ur writes r wonderful Dr Ram n yet another wonder here! Gl in contest!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/10/2014 10:19:00 AM

Love the last line plus the different ways you exemplify magical touch..:) excellent!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2014 10:17:00 AM

"The things touched with love ought to have a voice" I was touched by this line ..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/10/2014 10:06:00 AM

Your poem, touching, majestic and profound. One may write volumes just being inspired by the last line. I have a feeling, an epigram of mine, will be on the way soon! Excellent in every line! Good luck!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/10/2014 8:49:00 AM

Great job and great content....cheers Tim

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/10/2014 8:29:00 AM

Good one Dr Ram! I agree, the last line is a keeper..BG

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/10/2014 7:06:00 AM

I love it! The last line, great! I foresee this on the winners list, excellent my friend :)