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A Love Note

my name on your lips becomes the sweetest love song a whispered caress that awakens my senses your touch is my undoing 6/19/13 For Rick Parise's One Tanka - Love Note Contest

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 9/3/2013 2:26:00 PM
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This is a rather smart poem and a great write Kim, well done! MC
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Dan Kearley
Date: 7/11/2013 2:58:00 PM
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Very lovely indeed there Kimmy!
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 7/11/2013 9:12:00 AM
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Ah, yes. Lovely!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/5/2013 5:21:00 PM
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Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading this contest entry..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..I wrote a poem to the monotetra form and it was fun to write..I am glad that I learned about it from you..Sara
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Colleen Bono
Date: 7/2/2013 9:04:00 PM
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Sorry to hear about your Dad.May God surround you with his comfort and love.Colleen
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Heather Ober
Date: 7/2/2013 8:21:00 AM
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You did a fantastic job with this one! The perfect mix of spicy and subtle :) Congratulations!!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/26/2013 10:43:00 AM
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A very sexy love note Kim. Congrats I see you on the winning list. love phyl
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Elaine George
Date: 6/23/2013 6:37:00 PM
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Sensational Tanks, Kim. Top notch! Many congrats. Elaine
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/23/2013 12:04:00 AM
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ooh la la. A very sexy one I think!! Congrats to you, Kim. Glad I am finally getting to see this on the winners list.
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Joseph May
Date: 6/22/2013 6:04:00 PM
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congrats on a great win Kim
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/22/2013 4:35:00 PM
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Oh, my goodness.....so romantic!! Lovely poem and congratulations on your win!!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/22/2013 11:59:00 AM
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Beautiful Kim..congrats on your win. BG
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/22/2013 10:18:00 AM
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Very beautiful, Kim. Warm and passionate! Congrats! :)
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/21/2013 4:32:00 PM
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Beautiful, and that last line so sensual, and melting! Nicely done, Kim!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2013 1:11:00 AM
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- A beautiful poem, it was enjoyable to read. - Thank you Kim. - Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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