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A Love Note

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A Love Note

                                                   my name on your lips
                                         becomes the sweetest love song
                                                    a whispered caress
                                                that awakens my senses  
                                                your touch is my undoing   

For Rick Parise's One Tanka - Love Note 

Copyright © Kim Merryman

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 2:26:00 PM
    This is a rather smart poem and a great write Kim, well done! MC

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Very lovely indeed there Kimmy!

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 9:12:00 AM
    Ah, yes. Lovely!

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 7:10:00 PM
    Beautifully written Peter

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading this contest entry..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..I wrote a poem to the monotetra form and it was fun to write..I am glad that I learned about it from you..Sara

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 9:04:00 PM
    Sorry to hear about your Dad.May God surround you with his comfort and love.Colleen

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 8:21:00 AM
    You did a fantastic job with this one! The perfect mix of spicy and subtle :) Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:43:00 AM
    A very sexy love note Kim. Congrats I see you on the winning list. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 6:37:00 PM
    Sensational Tanks, Kim. Top notch! Many congrats. Elaine

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 12:04:00 AM
    ooh la la. A very sexy one I think!! Congrats to you, Kim. Glad I am finally getting to see this on the winners list.

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 6:04:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Kim

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Oh, my romantic!! Lovely poem and congratulations on your win!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 11:59:00 AM
    Beautiful Kim..congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:18:00 AM
    Very beautiful, Kim. Warm and passionate! Congrats! :)

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Beautiful, and that last line so sensual, and melting! Nicely done, Kim!!

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 1:11:00 AM
    - A beautiful poem, it was enjoyable to read. - Thank you Kim. - Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)