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A jealous woman am I…a very jealous woman For you, dear, are MY man, my very own possession Yes, I do own you; you are under my lock and key Don’t you dare now look at her, for you belong to ME! My love is a gilded cage, but a cage nonetheless If you dare try to escape, you’ll suffer…I confess You know I will track you down, and then I’ll make you pay I’ll bring fire to your nights and torture you by day You are branded with my love; it's plain for all to see Revenge on seductress will come swiftly, trust in me! The fire that burns you up when you are in MY bed The self same will sear your heart, if you love her instead You see, my dear, you’re mine…all mine…mine and ONLY mine Baby, don’t you mess things up, and I will treat you fine I’ll be your muse and your slave; I’ll be your everything Ask of me your every wish; I’ll treat you like a king. A jealous woman am I, a very jealous woman... But if you stay my own, I’ll make you taste of heaven. For Verlena's Green Eyed Monster Contest A Repost Not Entered in any contest before

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Date: 12/24/2014 6:01:00 PM
love it...hot and heated almost pyropornographic
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Date: 12/18/2014 9:55:00 PM
Congrats Eileen on POD; I enjoy your stand here my friend...huggs
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Date: 12/18/2014 8:37:00 PM
Congrats to you, Eileen! This is excellent and a great entry for the green-eyed monster contest too. You've got a winner here...a lot of fun to read! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/18/2014 5:31:00 PM
Very fun!
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Date: 12/18/2014 3:55:00 PM
Congrats ..On poem of the day..Well deserved choice!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 4:07:00 PM
:) I find this all so strange. I don't have as many views as others on their poems. How this all works, I have NO IDEA. Oh...but I'm happy! :) Hugs...Hey...check your soupmail! ;)
Date: 12/18/2014 2:01:00 PM
You Rock girlfriend -- I agree and double everyone's comments below!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 2:28:00 PM
Not so good at making shapes, as you are, David, but here it is. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_door_to_wayra_584352
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 2:25:00 PM
Hello! Ok Ok...Here I go looking for my door poem, David. I entered it in Nette's Wyra contest. Hold on...I'll post the link.
Date: 12/18/2014 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day, my "Jealous Woman". Well, my dear, why a man, if he were to be with you, would have any reason whatsoever to look at another woman? Charming poem for those who love to obey you! Hellish for those who would think not to! No comment from me because the comment has been already made by your crowning as Queen of the Day, dear Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 5:49:00 PM
Yes...you are right, my dear poet. It is a SUPERB comment! :) Efkharisto....filakia
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/18/2014 2:59:00 PM
It makes me happy your poem to be the POTD! As far as comment is concerned, my congratulations and my seven I think is enough for a comment!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 12:36:00 PM
:) Zelevo...zelevo..zelevo. Ti na kano? Thanks for visiting, my wise poet. I'm happy to see you here. Who would look at another woman? Indeed. That is a sweet sweet sentence to my heart. :) Thank you. Yes, I do like to be obeyed. I'm silly that way. Queen of the day...very strange...and hardly any comments. Perhaps I'm not the only one who is jealous! ;) Those I care for have commented, and that should do. Hugs, my dear.
Date: 12/18/2014 9:27:00 AM
I love this...big smiles...I had to look at this through your poems to see the picture and quote Charma was talking about....hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 12:37:00 PM
:) Hope you found it. Thanks for the visit and the kind words. Hugs
Date: 12/18/2014 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day ,Eileen. Wow! Green Eyed Monster does rule. Well writen, 7++, girl. Blessings and Merry Christmas
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/18/2014 1:59:00 PM
I love the photo you have chosen it is wonderful, it really does the poem more justice
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 12:37:00 PM
Thank you, dear sweet Eve. I'm glad to have you visit. Green Eyed Monster likes to visit me often! ;) I know I'm not the only way. Hugs to you!!!
Date: 12/18/2014 6:38:00 AM
Great entry, I hope you do well in this challenge. Congratulations on this Gem being chosen poem of the day.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:45:00 AM
I don't even have that many comments. Hmmmmmmm....Something seems a big strange, but....Heck! I'm ecstatic! Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:41:00 AM
Are you serious? I'm doubting this POTD system...Seriously...how does it happen? I'm not complaining, but....I write my heart out in sonnets, and this and that and this gets chosen? Well, I guess now everyone will know...I'm A JEALOUS WOMAN! ;) Thanks Maurice, for being the bearer or good news!! Hugs
Date: 12/17/2014 4:20:00 PM
I remember this poem cause it has touched me so much in the past.I wish I have written this powerful poem myself.Many times you are the voice hiding inside me..You and Richard..are like the thoughts I want to scream andcannot.We must be soul sisters : ). Fav.this gem.Is it difficult to add pics..I wish to learn..but only if its easy : ).Nice pic..The avatar too sis.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/18/2014 3:53:00 PM
Yes..it would. be a big favour if you told me how. in soup or in mail or wherever..A pic helps one understand better the poet 's momentary thoughts I think dear..tnks so much xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:48:00 AM
Charmaine...Sweetie...I'm glad my work speaks to you. :) Yes, we are soul sisters in many ways. Listen...about the pic thing. It drove me crazy for a while, but I got to know how. I'll soup mail you with details. Hugs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/17/2014 4:21:00 PM
The words on the pic made me smile...but Oh so true : )
Date: 12/17/2014 1:20:00 PM
Ohhh how very expressive...both poem and photo!! I don't think I've ever experienced jealousy...and I don't think I would want to be on the receiving end of it either! // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/17/2014 2:55:00 PM
Mind you, Eileen....instead of jealousy there were a few times when I experienced pain and disillusion....
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 2:44:00 PM
Paul....a little jealousy can be good. no? Well, to each his own, I guess. I wrote this some time ago....Yes, I am a bit possessive and can be jealous...What's mine is mine...But life teaches you many things....Jealousy can be destructive as well...and sometimes whether you are jealous or not...things don't change, so...what's the point. Thanks, Doc, for this time here on the couch. I hope you don't charge me too much. ;) hugs
Date: 12/17/2014 11:57:00 AM
Intense and sweet -- such a powerful love, the yin and yang of a relationship . . . you sentence structure was awesome -- short little punches!! Nicely done Little One, your talent shines!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 2:45:00 PM
:) Awwwww...thanks, David. I'm glowing with this praise. Little One is happy. Hugs.
Date: 12/17/2014 11:44:00 AM
Great Picture!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 11:54:00 AM
:) Thanks! Just figured out how to add pics to my poems. I have something on the last four. You know how much I LOVE pics from FB. In fact, I save great pics that I love and when I'm down...I go through pics to cheer up. SO happy I can do that here. oh...Forgot about the typo. Will fix it. Thanks.
Date: 12/17/2014 10:50:00 AM
This is AWESOME Eileen! "Branded by my love'.....a green eyed monster indeed! Best of luck in the contest. Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 11:56:00 AM
OH...I know that feeling. Take things easy, Hon. I'll be by to visit you too. HUGS...
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/17/2014 11:28:00 AM
All is good, just a lot of stuff going on. It's been way too long, I promise to visit your pages more often, your writes make me smile. Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 11:07:00 AM
Yes, that is the domineering spirit in me, Cecilia. This is Warrior Princess ALL THE WAY! I hope older writes are accepted. It's been a while. Hope all is fine, my dear. hugs
Date: 12/17/2014 10:49:00 AM
He would be wise to heed this warning*lol*! Small typo change plan to plain for all to see. Good luck in the contest Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 11:06:00 AM
:) Thanks, My Guardian Poet. You always keep an eye out for me! :) I'm so blessed.

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