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A Horse and a Donkey

Along a country a dusty country road There is a lot to explore I see a large house on the field Beside the home was a vegetable field With a huge scarecrow at watch To chase away all the birds On the other side - I saw A fence area with a white fence In the coral were two creatures A beautiful white horseI thought Beside the horse was a donkey They were standing side by side No sound came from either one They were staring at the road I thought it the stranges thing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/23/2017 1:46:00 PM
I guess they're keeping each company. They might be checking you out.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/24/2017 12:53:00 PM
Yes they could be watching the road, as well keeping each other company as well. They are checking out everyone they see. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 1/18/2017 12:51:00 PM
Been brought up in a village the images your poem paints are too familiar, ma chere amie Darlene! Well written!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/2/2017 8:06:00 AM
I am hapy to give you a memory Demetrris. Thank you.
Date: 1/17/2017 11:10:00 AM
A very pastoral, thought-provoking poem, Darlene. Some strange sights should make you take pause and notice. Very good poem, dear. I'm a city boy, so I love to read poem w/country or rural settings. Lovely poem you wrote. May love light your path always.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/2/2017 10:27:00 AM
I was born in a city as well,lived in a small town for 10 years. Strange sites make me wonder why it is that way.
Date: 1/16/2017 8:29:00 AM
I love the imagery it is not unlike some of the country farms around where I live. I could picture the one on Brewster Road almost identical to what you described a great fun little poem nicely done Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/2/2017 4:53:00 PM
Thank you Edward, I have seen a horse and a donkey in a fenced off area , and I thought how odd that was. So I wrote about it. Thank you Edward.
Date: 1/13/2017 7:05:00 PM
I enjoyed this pastoral picture you painted of the sight so strange to you. It's fun to write about things that just strike us as odd!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/4/2017 5:25:00 PM
I still wonder why the horse and the donkey were the only animals in the pasture. I will never know.

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