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A Homeless Home

A place constructed in scents and colours but walled by the bile of human character. Chilling air leaving behind an itchy mind and everything good in it, possesses a side effect. A holy temple and a war zone are mixed bred where the heart beats, jumps and relaxes in every minute; where freedom is bagged and heavily conditional and liberty, long been under serious medication. The theaters are good narrators of its reality b’cos every nice countenance and pleasant gesture is a product of a well dedicated rehearsal, hilariously crafting good times out of a certain time table. The wind of joy crosses this dwelling on its way to nature’s conference but avoids the same road on its way back as the red antenna signals its usual danger. An Indian slave enjoys more freedom and a hundred times liberty is experienced within a prison’s walls than this place, merely existing to satisfy reality’s fame. If this is a home- hell is an empire of peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/21/2015 7:47:00 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend filled with nice emotion. 7 I FEEL. Loved always,bl
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thank you immensely Devnath
Date: 12/17/2015 3:52:00 PM
oh my goodness. This is tragic. You write like someone who knows this plight too well. Sorry for that. But it is also making you a good writer, Funom
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thank you immensely Andrea... Its all from the head, all from the head!
Date: 12/17/2015 8:27:00 AM
An interesting and profound poem my dear friend, Funom Makama! A seven!
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thank you immensely Demetrios
Date: 12/17/2015 3:59:00 AM
- A really wonderful poem - Now that the time is near .... I wanna wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas for you and your loved ones, Funom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you immensely Anne Lise
Date: 12/17/2015 2:41:00 AM
Wow, great lines in this write.. A derelict home that rivals any prison... Or merely mental reflection from a homeless vagrant?
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you immensely Seng
Date: 12/16/2015 2:02:00 PM
this is a stirring work of art, funom... may peace be at the center of every home and country.. huggs
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 10:00:00 AM
Thank you immensely nette

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