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A Hawk Etheree

eyes super sharp search prey my spirit guide awakens memories and cosmic messages synchronicities abound beware, be bold, perceive, protect visionary powers, base chakra hawk medicine teaches observation

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Akkina Downing

Date: 8/7/2017 11:28:00 AM

You made it look so easy to write etheree. I have yet to write one. I'm inspired by yours :)

Phil Capitano
Date: 8/7/2017 11:37:00 AM

Thanks Akkina this was my first but I just posted my second called "Crematorium". Hope you like it.

Silent One

Date: 7/20/2017 6:17:00 AM

Etheree is one of my fave forms, you have written this very well..

Phil Capitano
Date: 7/20/2017 6:42:00 AM

Thanks S.O., glad to have you back. Still working with the form. Take care.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/19/2017 8:17:00 AM

Nice poem. Best of luck in the contest, sounds an interesting topic.

Phil Capitano
Date: 7/20/2017 6:43:00 AM

Thanks for visiting Scott, I appreciate it. :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/5/2017 5:02:00 PM

Excellent Etheree poem, Phil. Cool meditations. Superb imagery. Love always.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/2/2017 1:58:00 AM

GOOD ONE I love Etheree form. Last two lines are really impressive

Phil Capitano
Date: 7/2/2017 6:36:00 AM

Thanks Anisha that's so kind of you to say. Namaste.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/30/2017 4:46:00 PM

I love the Etheree form. She would be so thrilled to know so many celebrate her form today. Like the haiku, this short form takes some time to master. This is a brilliant example Phil! Your inclusion of the base chakra defines the animal instinct that we humans still need to control. I love this poem Phil! Bravo! : )

Phil Capitano
Date: 7/1/2017 6:51:00 AM

Thanks Connie that's so nice of you to say and do; I'm never sure how they are going to read. Have a great day. :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/30/2017 4:47:00 PM

I forgot to mention I Faved it! : )

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/29/2017 8:20:00 AM

Mystical writing exploring the depths of the soul! Excellent dear Phil! Good luck my friend!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/23/2017 4:56:00 PM

That is great Phil. I like how direct you were with the writing. Sharp and clear. Really fitting with the Hawk as a guide. Good luck in the contest :)

Phil Capitano
Date: 6/23/2017 8:04:00 PM

Thanks Heidi for the encouragement; my first etheree so I wasn't sure how it read.