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A Glimpse of Divinity

As blue skies fade out of view; mortal eyes look up to see a glimpse of divinity. Cerise tints the horizon as ribbons of crimson light adorn the fringes of night. And as clear crystals of ice color cottony clouds pink, a scarlet sun starts to sink. An ebony umbrella morphs into a veil of stars, high above Venus and Mars. And in the still of twilight silence admonishes sound, as the day slowly shuts down.

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Date: 3/16/2018 3:48:00 PM
Love this stanza "An ebony umbrella morphs into a veil of stars high above Venus and Mars. "
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2018 3:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/17/2015 9:49:00 AM
Another seven for me, Emile. You have the magic touch, painting vivid pictures with your words. Lovely.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/17/2015 10:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/12/2015 7:10:00 AM
Explosion of beauty in verses divine! Certain a seven, my friend, Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/12/2015 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios, I appreciate your kind words. Emile.
Date: 2/11/2015 5:30:00 PM
ohh, how visual and tranquil are your words so eloquently designed, emile... fascinating write.. huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/11/2015 6:16:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I value your opinion. Emile.
Date: 2/11/2015 3:46:00 PM
A beautiful sunset Emile...I love the fourth stanza...A veil of stars..perfect..A 7 +++
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/11/2015 4:09:00 PM
Thanks Tim, your friendly words warm my heart. Emile.

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