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A Free Bird

A bird flew close to some kids Then it walked to them The kids got very excited The little ones were very scared Mommy came close to it and put her palms up The bird walked right on them Comfortably standing there The kids got even more excited Around ten kids, all put their palms out Even the little ones The bird jumped from palms to palms The kids and the parents were all smiles and laughter Some took their cameras out I thought, this would be my next poem This was a beautiful scene The kids said "this is a friendly bird" I thought, this is a daring bird coming this close to the humans A free bird I wanted to take it home, maybe it could teach me a thing or two about life A bird walked on the road past traffic I was astonished to see this little bird Walking so confidently and fearlessly Like it didnt notice the big machinery and wheels Like it noticed the danger and all, but it was just a risk taker I wondered what was wrong with its wings It didn't look injured And it wasn't a baby either Away it continued, walking further into the grass A free bird A free heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/5/2015 7:50:00 AM
I've seen those birds, Njeri, The ones with free spirits who land on roadways with moving trucks and busses. Then fly away at the last minute, as if daring fate. I try to remember to bring bread or something from home to feed them. And I dribble water where they are. Sometimes they have no access to water. Jesus said, feed my sheep. I also feed his birds, as God feeds all of us with His Word.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/21/2015 7:43:00 PM
Hi, Njeri, if anything I said inspires you to follow what I'm doing then God will be pleased and so will I. ~~Blessings, Darlene
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/21/2015 6:51:00 PM
wow thats awesome what u do Darlene. you just taught me something awesome that i can also start doing. thank u for the visit and God bless
Date: 7/2/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comment about my poem "In Nursing School." Are you a nurse? Free bird reminds me of an interaction I had with a duck. I was walking in a public park and almost stepped on a duck. She refused to move and then I realized she was guarding her eggs. I greatly admired her courage.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/21/2015 6:49:00 PM
Thank u Gawaine. i appreciate your comment. good day
Date: 6/29/2015 9:05:00 AM
Top class free verse!...and thanks for the comment Njeri...Peter.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 6/29/2015 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Peter. I appreciate the visit. Good day

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