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A Forest of Dreams

Deep in the forest Where moonbeams work their magic Fairies come to dance Laughing at human concerns Dreams that rest a broken heart

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/19/2012 10:50:00 PM

Congrats on your win Barbara with your lovely poem! Blessings and love, Rhonda

John Freeman

Date: 5/19/2012 9:21:00 PM

Beautiful Job Barbara, Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/19/2012 6:31:00 PM

Nicely done Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

David Williams

Date: 5/19/2012 12:34:00 PM

Barbara congrats on your win..David

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2012 10:41:00 AM

Dear LNC, your poem reminded me of Shakespeare's play "Mid-Summer Night's Dream." A beautiful poem filled with fantasy an imagery. Alexa and I congratulate you on your win! Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/18/2012 10:33:00 AM

beautiful imagery Barbara, love the last line. harry

Woodrow Lucas

Date: 5/16/2012 7:17:00 AM

Thanks for this. Wonderful!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2012 9:39:00 PM

I like how you made this magical, Barbara!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/15/2012 8:03:00 PM

Good poem for the photo - best of luck with the contest. I bet those fairies do laugh at us.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/15/2012 8:03:00 PM

Good poem for the photo - best of luck with the contest. I bet those fairies do laugh at us.

Lisa Cooper

Date: 5/15/2012 7:41:00 PM

Looks like I am not the only one who has some writing to get done this evening lol lovely poem barbara