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A Flame You Lit

A Flame You Lit I hear your voice calling from verses long penned as swift it passes through and a flame lights in my heart’s hearth and within that space I write of the accursed poet whose spirit still in a slow but steady pendulum beat, through time moves, and I bathe in the magic of its swing; many are now dust but your ballads are not gone from the flavor of the hour, from the ashes of your name Villon one sip and your pen dipped in the mire pulling on the leash sniffing for traces of life, to our hunger still speaks, hanging in spiraling smoke, still vibrates like winter’s wind on the prowl, mocks the stars, animates the flowers of the night, and howls. François Villon is a French poet who was born in 1431, the year Joan of Arc was burned at the stake. As a student of the University of Paris, he participated in many brawls and pranks. He even killed a priest (he was defending himself from the man’s attack, picked up a rock and accidently killed him) and was granted full pardon. He was later imprisoned and tortured, but released by the new king Louis XI. He ended up ‘exiled’ from Paris for 10 years His ‘Testament’ will forever live on. He fascinates me because he reminds me of my younger brother, a bright star who had a dark glow.

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Date: 5/2/2017 1:46:00 PM
This is a very well-structure piece. A pleasure to read.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/2/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thank so much for your comments Forrest. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 4/30/2017 4:04:00 PM
I am at a loss for words, this poem is so beautiful, not to mention I love historical writes, especially concerning the history of France. This is a super Fav for me!!
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/1/2017 7:12:00 AM
Cher Arthur, I am deeply touched by your response. Poets will always sing the most marvelous songs about love and nature but I think that poetry is an ideal medium to awaken or even sharpen our interest in art (and you surely did that), history, philosophy, and music:)
Date: 4/30/2017 1:18:00 PM
Like a moth to a flame you seduce us with the heat of you words and lure us with their purity. I warmed to your words in the light they where offered, and it felt good to hear a voice from the past come to life. Emile.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/1/2017 7:02:00 AM
Emile, my words cannot truly express my appreciation for such a wonderful review. Thank you my friend. I am so glad you felt his presence still casting a flame; it seems his words are still calling to us through the ages.
Date: 4/30/2017 10:48:00 AM
Good Morning Anne Marie. My goodness. Your level of talent is top level. Your words are very expressive. Your formatting and layout is exceptional. I know the time and input it takes to execute such an entry. You deliver attention to detail. Just your first two lines alone not to mention the title are all poetic. And yes, allow me to say this is an entry to be read out loud. Thank you for the education also. Well done in its entirety. Have a wonderful day.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/1/2017 6:53:00 AM
Bonjour Lisa, how can I ever thank you for such a review. I have learned a lot from you and many like you who never cease to inspire me. Thank you again my friend and I can't wait to see you on your page with the seagulls, the ocean, a shining star, whatever your mind embraces and sends our way:)
Date: 4/29/2017 1:19:00 PM
I went and read some Villon, and the ballad is truly outstanding. I found it extremely interesting that I could read the 15th century French; the language does not seem to have changed as dramatically as English. Is that so, or is it only that my poor French does not let me notice the difference? (I mean, there are words I don't know, and I can't tell whether that's because they are archaic, or because my vocabulary is not good.) May I ask why you prefer English? I find French very beautiful.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/29/2017 5:23:00 PM
I had the same reaction you did when I first read the 15th century text Agnes; I was shocked to see that some passages were quite easy to understand whereas others had me stumped. I was a Foreign Language major in H.S. & college (English, German, latin, Spanish, even a smattering of Chinese), and English always was my first love . . . 50% of the songs on the radio were in English when I was growing up. Also, I'm a gypsy at heart and love to travel, so English was the obvious language of choice.
Date: 4/29/2017 7:10:00 AM
What a great expose of this poet. Thank you for sharing it - the flame image in words is brilliant - A definite 7 on all counts Anne Marie.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/29/2017 11:27:00 AM
Maria, your comments are greatly appreciated as always my friend:)
Date: 4/29/2017 5:35:00 AM
As I said in reply to your question below, yes I speak French :) J'ai vécu en France.... deux ans, plus ou moins.... I read my Beaudelaire, Verlaine et Rimbaud in French, my passive knowledge is fine. I do know my active French isn't perfect, but it's enough to get me going.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/29/2017 5:06:00 PM
Je comprends ce que tu veux dire Darren parce que j'ai fait six ans d'allemand et trois ans de latin, mais il n'en reste pas grand chose (not much) parce que je ne les utilise pratiquement jamais:)
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Darren White
Date: 4/29/2017 12:11:00 PM
Oui, et aussi le néerlandais, l'allemand, et l'ancien langage Latin. But, as I said, my active control over the language isn't as good as my passive. It's handy :)
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/29/2017 11:26:00 AM
Tu parles donc l'anglais, l'arabe, le français, l'espagnol je présume et quelles autres langues? I am seriously impressed that you are reading them in French, Darren, but I'm glad because so much is lost in translation.
Date: 4/28/2017 11:25:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Anne-Marie. The concrete form is well executed, and you inspired me to go read some Villon. I think I am familiar with the name, but don't recall any of his work. Are you bilingual? You mention writing on a French site. I love French, but despite many efforts to learn, my French is not very good; I can read, but not carry a conversation.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/29/2017 11:18:00 AM
Bonjour Agnes, je te remercie pour tes commentaires si chaleureux. Je suis française mais la langue que je préfère est l'anglais:)
Date: 4/28/2017 3:48:00 PM
Very awe-inspiring Anne-Marie...you are very talented
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/28/2017 9:33:00 PM
Thank you Tim but truly the talent lies with my subject matter:)
Date: 4/28/2017 3:29:00 PM
I agree w/Darren ... you have a fascinating way w/words, Anne-Marie. Beautiful prose and image. Stellar poetry at its best. A sure-fire 7. Love always.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/28/2017 9:30:00 PM
Un grand merci Freddie for your very supportive comments:)
Date: 4/28/2017 2:39:00 PM
Wow Anne-Marie I think this is the most intriguing concrete poem I have ever read - thank you for the detailed information and bringing this poet to my notice... i actually got a tingle down my spine with the flame like shape and his sad death:-( hugs jan xx
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/28/2017 9:23:00 PM
Glad you liked it Jan. His father was actually hung for thievery but we don't know exactly how Villon died because his sentence was commuted and he was exiled from Paris.
Date: 4/28/2017 2:22:00 PM
Wonderful write Anne-Marie, I will have to look up Villon, I'm not familiar with him or his work but am awfully intrigued now :) xomo 7
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/28/2017 9:16:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. I'm so glad you are thinking about looking him up. His 'Ballad of the Hanged Men' is one of his most famous works.
Date: 4/28/2017 10:01:00 AM
the poem made me feel the admiration for the French poet François Villon and the love of a brother
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/28/2017 9:09:00 PM
The admiration for François Villon is undeniably there Verlecia. I am in absolute awe at some of his later poems.
Date: 4/28/2017 9:39:00 AM
A wonderful concrete poem!
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/28/2017 9:06:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and your kind comment Kim.
Date: 4/28/2017 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful Anne-Marie, great concrete!!! And it is a wonderful poem too, as all your poems are, you have such a way with words. I love the little explanation below the poem too. Time to me to go and read some Villon! I am inspired to, now.
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Darren White
Date: 4/28/2017 11:36:00 PM
Mais oui je comprends, j'ai vécu en France. I know my French isn't perfect, but it's only one of about 6 languages I speak and write.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/28/2017 9:05:00 PM
You are so nice Darren, and I am excited that it inspired you to look up his poems. Au fait (by the way), Est-ce que tu parles français ou bien est-ce que tu comprends un peu le français?
Date: 4/28/2017 8:02:00 AM
Such an enticing, creative and incredible poem Anne Marie. And not only because of the shape you amazingly crafted with your words but the feeling of the poem itself. It sent my mind on a journey that it didn't want to come back from. Love the notes too, that is very interesting. beautiful done my friend.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/28/2017 8:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Chris. The truth is I had just posted a long poem about Villon on a French site but there was still something stirring in me, so I decided to let it out in another language.

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