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A Different Way of Thinking

I am in awe of minds that weave and bend, finding hidden meanings in the meanderings of life. For them a leaf is much more than just a leaf. Perhaps it has impact on the universe.. Surely it fell at that moment in time for a reason. Did the fact that it nestled against her skirt as she sat in the grass have some hidden substance. …? There may be deep contemplation of life and the sadness and joy inherent in this cycle. A simpler mind sees the leaf and thinks… How beautiful this colored gift.. And lets it’s being sit easily ..

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Date: 9/25/2016 12:05:00 PM
Wow!! Mightily impressed, Barbara...Truly I am. This is very well done indeed - Top marks from me! My best regards. :) john
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/25/2016 1:24:00 PM
A sincere thank you John. Good to hear from you. BG
Date: 9/24/2016 12:43:00 PM
It is all in the way of thinking and seeing this world. Lovely poem. love phyl
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Date: 9/20/2016 11:32:00 AM
Yes! Robert Frost would create a forest from that one leaf. Good stuff, Barb. Congrats. Love, daver
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Date: 9/18/2016 10:28:00 PM
A lovely poem to ponder Barbara. Congratulations on having it featured! ; ) 7
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Date: 6/12/2009 6:27:00 PM
Wow, this one had my mind working overtime, interesting approach Barbara, and crafted well, thank you so much for your kind comments>>James
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Date: 6/12/2009 8:11:00 AM
love this write. "a leaf is much mor than just a leaf" very neat- love and peace: james
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Date: 6/12/2009 2:28:00 AM
This reminds me to focus on the simple things like my children do. Funny thing is I learn from my 2 and 3 year old as they are learning from myself. This is awesome BG! Nate
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Date: 6/11/2009 8:56:00 PM
Interesting thoughts. In your second line, I think you meant to write, "finding hidden meanings". I believe that depends on the perspective on life and things at that moment. But there is definitely much beauty in the simpler things. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 6/11/2009 8:01:00 PM
Simpler minds see more beauty then we need simpler minds. Thought provoking write. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 6/11/2009 7:54:00 PM
you invite the reader to join you on this fun journey of the mind, with a spare leaf as the subject, lotsa fun! Barbara! Jim
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