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A Diamond's Remnants Premiere Contest Winner

A Diamond's Remnants beneath a full moon their kiss in winter’s first snow. . . her soft eyes glowing her delighted gasp as he opens the ring case. . . the night sky sparkles the months since she died he wakes sometimes to dreams of diamonds in her eyes in dementia’s fog the snow, the sky and her eyes. . . a diamond's remnants Written 12/28/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/3/2017 8:54:00 AM
On reading the last verse, i feel the heaviness of the diamonds in her eyes. A beautiful image through and through! I see why you won!
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Date: 5/25/2017 2:25:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your first-place win! While I sense lots of wonderful memories and some shadows in your piece here, I'm focusing on the former. Well done! :)
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Date: 5/25/2017 9:00:00 AM
Congrats to you Andrea for a well- deserved 1st. placement.
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Date: 5/24/2017 4:38:00 PM
I always believed that diamonds are forever! Beautifully written, Andrea. Congratulations on placing first! Now, hold that trophy high :) Regards // paul
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:54:00 AM
by the way , is she you.
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:53:00 AM
cold but so romantic. skat
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Date: 2/10/2014 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations Petal :)
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Date: 2/8/2014 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations Petal. Loved this poem. Will take me a while to catch up on yours so I'll be jumping top and bottom for some timeTake care, Richard
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:16:00 PM
Nicely done on this one. My computer is acting up tonight but I want to finsih last year so I will have read you up to this year. love phyl
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your wonderful win..:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Date: 1/16/2014 12:02:00 PM
many congrats Andy xx
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:45:00 AM
Congats..Sara
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:05:00 AM
This is very powerful and moving. Congratulations on your win. If you have a chance read my poem "pickpocket" I think you will appreciate it.
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:02:00 AM
So full of angst..another wonderful win for you. congrats. BG
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:41:00 PM
Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Andrea
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Date: 1/14/2014 4:56:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 1/14/2014 4:41:00 PM
Amazing piece,beautiful write.....Congrats on your win......
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Date: 1/14/2014 3:08:00 PM
- Congratulations Andrea, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2014 9:44:00 PM
Wow! I love how you tied all these together as a diamond's remnants. Very clever, Andrea!
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Date: 1/9/2014 9:07:00 AM
Beautiful. Memories of love always shine through
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Date: 1/7/2014 7:57:00 PM
I really do like this form, and spent more time studying it than the others I think, and still think it's one of the harder forms to write. Great work, and as always, I'm sure you don't need luck for the contest, but I wish the best and you should do well.
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Date: 1/7/2014 6:11:00 PM
I like the age progression from verse to verse. This is a very dramatic poem with beautiful imagery. Amazing work, Andrea! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments.
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Date: 1/5/2014 12:48:00 PM
such pathos, andie... on top of the shelf; beautiful!.. huggs
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Date: 1/4/2014 2:44:00 AM
Probably the best Haiku I've ever read. It's also a very passionate, deep and caring write, tinged with melancholy in nostalgic hue.
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Date: 1/2/2014 6:08:00 PM
Ahhh..a tearjerker...and winner.....great job Andrea
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