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A Depressed Ant

Watching the marching ants, while I wondering their monotonous strife, A weary one left the line, away he walked to a lonesome land. Hands on head with faltering gait, dearth of joy he wandered a bit. There he lied low to the ground, kissing mother earth like a depressed ant. Is he an osculator, mourning on his vacant love? Or he an emulous one, cudgeled by a better brain? A miffed rummager of copious grain, or he repenting on a horrible crime? I pondered on his dreadful distress, longing for the profound stillness. Watching the painful life astir my humanity, finer ways I posit to end his endless tomorrows, From a creative mind, unknown to the quizzical ant, First I gifted a bubble of water, for him to drown in style. But he moved in insolent silence, may be knows the art of swimming! Then I helped him to the edge of the land, for a profane jump to the bottomless deep. A coward, fearing height he retreat, back to the land panting nervy. Later I offered bane of death, but he sniffed and moved away. Then a knot for him to hang, eyeing it he jumped through it. While my drained splendid mind, puzzled by his mocking insolence, Sneering at my humanity, picking a hill on his shoulder, He walked back to the line of labour, leaving me - the foolish human. Life is dancing in the background, on the stage of silent death. Date of Entry : 26/07/2020 Contest : Pareidolia Poetry Contest Sponsor : craig cornish

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Date: 8/3/2020 9:39:00 AM
Highly original..Jenish! Best wishes.. Pangiexx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 11:38:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota..
Date: 7/27/2020 1:32:00 AM
Watching the ants at work surely we get an idea of life's struggle dearest, Jenish! Inspiring and profound writing that teaches us a lesson or two! Good luck my friend!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/27/2020 1:44:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/26/2020 9:30:00 PM
poor ant, he needed a little parachute to float around for awhile, until he felt relaxed enough to join the line of labour and hopefully be able to look forward to a happier time before his time on earth is up.... life goes on..... I really enjoyed reading this interesting verse .Thank you Jenish...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 9:33:00 PM
Thank you Shirley.. I tried to mock on the mentality of human animals towards a little depression.. Happy to know that you enjoyed the write..
Date: 7/26/2020 5:56:00 PM
Ha, ha! I don't know anything about this contest, but it sure brings out the creative energy in you!! What a romp! ~ Your Ant and Uncle
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 9:31:00 PM
lol.. Tried to be a little mischievous.. Thank you Gershon for your support..
Date: 7/26/2020 7:20:00 AM
- The ant : Small? ... I? ... Far from ... I'm just big enough - Fills myself completely longitudinally and transversely from top to bottom - Are you bigger than yourself maybe? - hugs // Anne-Lise :) ... Good luck in the contest :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 9:30:00 PM
I tried to bring a bit of sarcasm on the human approach towards depression.. People are committing suicide for a lot variety of reasons.. I don't know how much I could convey.. Anyway a big thanks for your support..

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