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A Delusional Christmas

Sixpence none the richer Christmas day unwrapping that pretty silver bow hoping for the proverbial pot of gold amongst treasures Santa left in tow Street corner kettles all dressed in red full of empty promises and seasonal semblance of somehow now caring for that colurless fellow bells relentlessly taking toll inside my head Gifts of wine and cheer soon to disappear at the first fall of winter's fresh flakes slip sliding downhill on an icy terrain blaming all your faults on others mistakes Curling up with the cat eyeing tinsel on the street preferring a cup of eggnog over other's company waiting for the last light bulb to bust and the return of normalcy, hatred, and mistrust

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Date: 12/14/2016 6:51:00 PM
Hello Tim,I agree with KIM it is a sad Christmas lots of people do experience a lonely Christmas.egg nog is good.In a way I am also celebrating Christmas alone without my husband. It will be hard on me. No Christmas spirit, this year.I always enjoy reading your poetry.
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Date: 12/12/2016 4:25:00 PM
I always spend Xmas dinner alone Tim if not at work. It's a long standing tradition the children have of having Xmas dinner with granny, that I did not want to break. It can be sad, but also strangely peaceful, preferring eggnog to false gaiety.
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Date: 12/12/2016 11:49:00 AM
For me this will be the first time I will celebrate Christmas. It's strange and I have no idea what it will be like. But I'm looking forward to it. Beautiful poem, Tim.
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Date: 12/12/2016 11:27:00 AM
Such a sad Christmas and certainly one that many people experience. Yet, a cup of nog and a warm kitty is not a bad thing. Great write, dear Tim!
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Date: 12/11/2016 8:46:00 PM
After a few more "eggnog's" came back for a second read!!!
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Date: 12/11/2016 2:49:00 PM
For many I imagine it's like that. Christmas also brings the chance to mend fences as well. Nicely done. God Bless and Merry Christmas. JB
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Date: 12/11/2016 12:59:00 PM
Christmas may bring the greatest of joys and the most unbearable sadness my friend, Tim! A fine poem where many sentiments parade! Merry Christmas my friend!
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Date: 12/11/2016 8:58:00 AM
Not to mention the competitive shopping season leading up to the big day;-) I like how you "austere-ized" the event. We like to believe we're shooting for the stars even though we live in the bozone. Silly beans we are! Ah well, cheers n' choc'lit ~ j
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Date: 12/11/2016 3:24:00 AM
Christmas can be very sad for some who are dealing with loss or loneliness, poverty etc. It kind of makes the joy of Christmas shoppers make a person feel even worse. Your poem reflects that very well Tim. Songs like "Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas" I can imagine someone crying to that song. ; )
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Date: 12/11/2016 2:12:00 AM
Sad write but well penned. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 12/10/2016 9:35:00 PM
I would love to see that pot of gold under my tree where do you shop :) love your verse Tim,,, add a little 'Hot Damn' Cinnamon Schnapps with that eggnog mmmmm.... Merry Christmas Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/10/2016 8:19:00 PM
i like eggnog and i know the feeling at every stage ....Seren
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:39:00 PM
Tim, yeah, there is that aspect of the season. Somebody once said, "Hell is other people."
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:26:00 PM
You put the Grinch in this one Tim...Nice write..
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Date: 12/10/2016 4:52:00 PM
oooh... I love it in a strange way... well done!
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Date: 12/10/2016 3:44:00 PM
Wow, now that sure cheered me up! LOL Loved the poem though!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/10/2016 3:56:00 PM
I got some!
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/10/2016 3:55:00 PM
lol...now I need more eggnog...I better hurry the snow is falling
Date: 12/10/2016 2:40:00 PM
Hi Tim, What a well written piece. Although I enjoy the Christmas time of the year. The Christmas spirit should be carried on throughout the year and not just on Christmas day. Thanks for sharing this piece it reminds the reader to strive to have the "Christmas" spirit every day. May you and your family have a Merry Christmas.A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/10/2016 2:54:00 PM
I so believe so too...a positive thing is happening in my neighborhood. We put up a giving tree in the town square where you can do good for unfortunate families.
Date: 12/10/2016 2:18:00 PM
It is so sad. We save our love for one day a year. Some even has a price. i relate well with your poem, Tim. Wishing you and yours a safe and happy holidays. May it be filled with love and happiness:)
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/10/2016 2:24:00 PM
I see it all...a 94 yr old lady near me got mugged of her purse 2 days ago and she suffered broken ribs and bruised face...it is so sad

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