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A Day In May

Allured ripples of sparkling lips Through meadows fanned by fragrant breeze Her face I’ve touched with fingertips Along floral banks which appease. While waters brisk with melody Aid one's journey to buoyant sea The choral breach of hymnody Welcome the waves of sonic glee. © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/27/2022 5:58:00 AM

I'm in love with every beautiful and melodic line, Harry...a fave for me. Congrats! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/19/2022 1:54:00 PM

Harry, congratulations on your win in Andera's contest. . Blessings to you.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/18/2022 11:42:00 PM

wow, a song xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/18/2022 11:02:00 AM

Harry, "sonic glee" indeed. The breeze, the stream and "her face I've touched with fingertips" are wonderfully crafted in this symphonic rhapsody of love in scenes of May. Congratulations on your win for this beautiful painting meant to be viewed and enjoyed each and every day.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/16/2022 8:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love it. Have a blessed day/week...................

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/15/2022 10:58:00 PM

Well done Harry'

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/15/2022 10:58:00 PM

Well done Harry'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2022 1:55:00 PM

What stood out for me with this one was the beautiful imagery. Thanks so much for creating this pretty poem, harry. Congrats in my contest.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/14/2022 7:56:00 AM

Vibrant, vivid imagery with profound meaning and eloquently executed - in short stupendous. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anil Deo

Date: 5/11/2022 1:17:00 AM

O so good, Harry. Musical, poetic, a fave (I miss your comment-uplift in May) shalom, shalom

Bill Baker

Date: 5/10/2022 4:04:00 PM

Exquisite imagery, Harry. A lovely written poem. Bill

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/10/2022 12:44:00 PM

Well done, Harry, Bravo! You caught me on those first two lines, Just stunning! Pangie xo

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/10/2022 10:51:00 AM

Love the imagery and you don't come across the word "hymnody" often.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/10/2022 7:19:00 AM

This is beautiful Harry. I love it :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2022 7:07:00 AM

Harry, you've done an excellent job with the imagery and the description. Beautiful and quite artistic, to say the least! Wishing you the best of success in the contest.

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/9/2022 4:25:00 PM

Her face I’ve touched with fingertips...how romantic, Harry good luck in the contest!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/9/2022 12:23:00 PM

I hear the sound of sweet sweet music, and its connected to your darling poetry Harry, thanks you for sharing, wings wishes on Angel dove wings

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/9/2022 11:50:00 AM

Sweet!

Judy Ball

Date: 5/9/2022 9:12:00 AM

Ooo! Love this. So beautifully worded and wonderful rythem and rhyme. God Bless, B

Valsa George

Date: 5/9/2022 4:49:00 AM

May is a month of alluring beauty and romance ! You have kept up the spirit of a lovely day in May 'fanned by fragrant breeze' and 'waters brisking with melody'