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A Date

let's go out on a date no one but you and me nothing very fancy just dinner and a movie i'll pick you up at seven in my shinny car stop to buy you flowers treat you like a star i'll say your very beautiful but tonight your much much more prettier than usual when you came to the door i'll open all your doors and pull back all your chairs if that's the kind of gentilman you'll want me to be in my conversation i'll try to use my ears to pick up the little things you've learned through out the years smiles will just be smiles as we banter back and forth and little moments of silence as time takes it's course when our time is finished and we stand at your door please don't leave me kissless and invite me back once more

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Date: 12/7/2010 8:09:00 AM
What girl wouldn't want that kind of treatment from a gentleman. She would be a very lucky women to be treated with such respect . Love Phyl
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:37:00 AM
You are a true gentleman, John. And I'm sure with your sweet kind ways she will invite you back with a hug and kiss. Keep them thoughts happy in any lucky women that shall fall into your arms. As for me my heart stays by the shore staring at the course of life. And the reason WHY? One can be so special and still have lost love without reason. Hugs from Texas,..p.d.
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Date: 12/5/2010 12:59:00 PM
nice writing
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Date: 12/3/2010 2:37:00 AM
A sweet poem, your girlfriend should be very happy if you treat her this way and she will surely give you a kiss:) Hugs, Emilia:)
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:22:00 AM
Super charming, John. This one flows along perfectly. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/1/2010 1:06:00 PM
I think the lady will enjoy this date, maybe she'll invite you back for coffee...
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Date: 12/1/2010 1:00:00 PM
what a charmer you are.. and this sweet, crisp piece says it all... stunning, john.. thanks for passing by my page! warmest, nette
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Date: 12/1/2010 12:19:00 PM
John, that kind of treatment would deserve a kiss for sure that is if you brushed your teeth..I enjoyed..Had great rhyme and rhythm..I am glad that you thought of this topic..I was delighted that you stopped by my work and commented...I am glad that you found my form done well..Wasn't sure but now that I have your approval I know that it was done correctly..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2010 12:10:00 PM
John: Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so vrey glad that you liked it. Janice Herzog
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Date: 12/1/2010 10:45:00 AM
WELL WRITTEN AND INSPIRING ART. THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MY POEMS... I LOVE IT. I WROTE ANOTHER POEM CALLED "THINGS FALL APART".
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Date: 12/1/2010 10:23:00 AM
very very sweet John. .lovely!
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Date: 12/1/2010 9:48:00 AM
so inviting! Loved it
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Date: 12/1/2010 9:34:00 AM
What a date!!!!!and what an ardent passion in the last verse, john.
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Date: 12/1/2010 9:30:00 AM
A perfect date, John! But pick me up at eight. Then I won't be late. And you won't have to wait. LOL A delightful poem from a true gentleman. Love, Carolyn
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