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A Cup of Bitterness

This empty cup I fill with tears For all those lonely wasted years Now realizing much to late That love is lost on those who wait For when the fruit was on the vine Somehow I never took the time To pluck it when it reached its prime So it became a bitter wine. So I drink these tears of bitterness In hopes that I can finally rest Beneath the earths warm waiting breast Finally plucked in time for death So drink a toast to my last breath She who thought she knew what’s best. Inspired by: T. Decker's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/26/2012 3:12:00 PM
wow, what a splendid sonnet this is. I do not see many written as nicely as this one, sweet lady!!
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Date: 8/13/2009 4:01:00 PM
great write elaine. i remember you commenting on my poems a while back, i am back with a different name now :) keep it up!
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Date: 11/30/2008 5:53:00 AM
Dear Elaine - Everything you pen is a winner in my eyes. You are an extremely talented poetess! Congratulations on your 3 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/24/2008 10:12:00 PM
This is a beautiful piece of poetry, Elaine. You have so much talent. Congrats on being in the first round and good luck on the next round.
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Date: 11/3/2008 7:12:00 AM
The iambs are almost perfect but sonnets have 10 iambs per line. Verse here's how lines 9 &12 would look in iambic pentameter. So now I drink these tears of bitterness I have finally plucked for death
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Date: 11/2/2008 2:46:00 PM
Well, I liked this good on 10/26 too ... smile ... a well-deserved selection to be featured this week! Congratulations and good luck as a "first round survivor" ...
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Date: 11/2/2008 1:12:00 PM
Dear Elaine, Congrats on your poem being featured this week. It is indeed a very well deserved feacher. This is a heartrending poem -sunk in sadness and gloom. God Bless You. -Mohammad
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Date: 11/1/2008 7:33:00 PM
Well Elaine here is another to the finals - no surprise at all - God Bless
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Date: 10/30/2008 6:44:00 PM
Elaine your poetry is ever so amazing - Congrats on being featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations, and good luck! A deserving poem for both areas ...the feature, and the contest!! ~ Blessings...Carrie
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Date: 10/28/2008 6:39:00 AM
Congrats Lainie, on your sonnet "A Cup Of Bitterness" being featured. Vince
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Elaine, on having three poems chosen as semi-finalists. It is a tribute to your talent. Best wishes in the finals. Keep on writing my friend. Karen
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Date: 10/27/2008 11:32:00 AM
Very nice poem.Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week.Rgds and good luck to you in everything.Dorian
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Date: 10/27/2008 10:09:00 AM
Oh my goodness ,I love this poem Lainie. Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 8:42:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Elaine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/26/2008 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations Lainie on your amazing poetry being featured this week. I remember this one well. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/26/2008 4:46:00 PM
Oh my ... sad to waste precious time on such a cup ... smile ... wonderful writing here, Elaine and you have THREE (!!) writes included in the semi-finals of the PoetrySoup contest ... WOW ... good luck to you!!
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Date: 10/26/2008 12:59:00 PM
Elaine Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :)
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Date: 10/26/2008 11:17:00 AM
Hi Elaine, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem feature to my other comment. Keep up the good writing my friend. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 9/2/2008 9:45:00 AM
what a bitter wine!regret mixed with reisgnation to a fatal fate.so vividly expressed, so true,so so deep...great write.jide badmus
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Date: 8/28/2008 9:58:00 PM
Wow, what an imaginative story! I like the theme in this sonnet. It's consistent and the lines flow very well. This sounds like a winner to me. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 8/28/2008 9:37:00 PM
Elaine - You never cease to astound me - Just a truly amazing poem - I'm sorry I haven't gotten back to you yet I will tomorrow ok - Great I simply can't wait - I'll e-mail asap in the morning - God Bless you Elaine
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Date: 8/28/2008 5:56:00 AM
The rhyme in this makes the flow one of easiness. The read is understood through a terrific use of imagery. Wonderfully composed but I couldn't help but feel sad for the subject. MIchael
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Date: 8/27/2008 3:26:00 PM
It captures the essence of utter sadness..Very well-written..Thank you for sharing TYOne, Farah
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Date: 8/24/2008 8:14:00 PM
Hi Elaine, such a great sad and poignant write, love it, take care D-nyce
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