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A Chance For Victory

The weeping of my unrealized dreams I hear Coming from the deep well, of unforgiving time Asking me, their aspirations to betray no more But give them a chance for a victory sublime! © Demetrios Trifiatis 28 December 2015

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Michael Tor

Date: 12/30/2015 1:39:00 PM

Wonderful write my friend every dream should be realized and recognized. Hope you are well my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/28/2015 2:23:00 PM

Demetrios, I've missed your poetry my friend. There's always a profound message that flows from your pen. "The weeping of my unrealized dreams I hear" this lined grabbed my attention until the very end. Victory is on the way! Thanks for sharing-Alexis 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/28/2015 3:32:00 PM

Hi Alexis, I have missed you and your visits! I hope you are fine! Thank you for your visit and your kind comment! Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year!

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/28/2015 9:18:00 AM

Weeping of unrealized dreams are given a chance for a victory sublime is very deeply rooted in the core of heart and nicely expressed with philosophical rhythm. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/28/2015 3:33:00 PM

My friend, BL, thank you for your dear visit and comment! Happy New Year! God bless you!