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A Bumpy Road

Life is a bumpy road, it curves, and isn't straight We are all independent, driving in our own lanes In life we face our negatives and strugle through the pain It's like driving through the rain, but at the end of the day It's all about striving happiness, so for now take aim And take risks sometimes, don't live life lame Because what fun is it, if we all live the same Driving in the same road, in the same lane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/18/2014 8:07:00 PM
Caleb, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/7/2014 11:35:00 PM
I like this. Well done and welcome to p-soup! Stop by and read my ramblings sometime
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Date: 2/7/2014 11:49:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Caleb- I choose your first good and well written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/7/2014 10:35:00 AM
I really like the message you are conveying here. I relate to it. The world be truly be boring if everyone and everything was the same. Kudos; enjoyed this piece :)
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Date: 2/7/2014 8:06:00 AM
Caleb,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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