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A Break

You said it could not last
You said it was just too fast
You said you needed a break 
I said that it was a mistake
Now I sit here every day
Just waiting for what you say

I wonder what comes next 
Will you break my heart by text
Or if that should fail 
Perhaps by electronic mail
Or will you keep it sweet
And break my heart with a tweet

I want to go on my face book
But I’m afraid to take a look
Then the phone rings out of the blue
I look and see that it is you
Should I answer you or not
My heart runs cold then hot

I answer, you say come round
My feet don’t touch the ground
As I rush to see what you will say
As I run I softly pray
You tell me that you love me
And together we should be

My heart it leaps 
I hug and kiss you heaps
My heart not broke
A happy bloke
I will make you see you made the right choice
With words of love from pen and voice

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:27:00 AM
    I love this. It's very Romantic. There are not many men like you left. Have a great day. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 11:32:00 AM
    Hope you stay a happy bloke..Nice write my friend.Hang in there... :o)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 10:48:00 PM
    wow, what a GREAT love poem for these modern high tech times. I really like your approach here. Keep it up with writes like these, Owen!!

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 5:52:00 PM
    Dear Owen, I do not know what with your voice did, BUT with your pen you did succeed! Lovely, hope you live happily ever after! Wonderful!

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Owen great write, fiction?...David

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 2:37:00 AM
    all said so well,....I like this poem and can relate to many lines of this one...thanks for sharing, a good day to you

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:04:00 PM
    Owen,, i have a poem called hot & cold... you described the emotions and feelings well. My poem is not as clever as this.. but i can relate to the mix emotions right now... should I answer or not... always a pleasure... LINDA

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 2:33:00 PM
    Owen, I hope it's just fantasy ... I do not have face book .... "gossip book" - very well written. - Have a lovely new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)