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A Birthday

Birthdays come and go Some are looked forward to with great anticipation And some anticipated with gloomy thoughts of time passing But each one must be acknowledged in customary form If nothing else, but to please those who try so hard A dinner, gifts, and singing the song Quite often the same ritual year after year In one manner or another Whether be it a big pizza party for a six year old Or something to honor a great grandfather turning ninety nine A celebration of some form, Sometimes with streamers, pinatas, and games Or a quiet gathering...a small number sitting around A little table at The Olive Garden for an hour No balloons, no cake, no candle, but acknowledgement, just the same Nice.... Looking back on the latter, this simple family gathering An evening dinner hour at The Olive Garden The honoree, a woman, whose years seem to pass by so quickly Over plates of ravioli, and eggplant parmasean, one special moment A memory of a birthday that won't be forgotten When a blonde little boy, .......her grandson With his head held low, his 6 year old manner Quiet, with shy repose, reaching into his pocket, Holding out his one and only.. Most precious minature figure of Darth Vader Saying, ..."I brought this for you, Grandma. It's your present." What better birthday could a Grandma have? Happy Birthday To Me!!

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Date: 4/11/2010 12:13:00 PM
A very happy birthday indeed. Well done on being featured this week too! best wishes, Kaye
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Date: 4/10/2010 4:55:00 PM
Carrie~ Congratulations on your featured poem A birthday! well done! Love Laura :)
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Date: 4/10/2010 6:51:00 AM
congrts carrie and hope you have or had a great birthday enjoyed the read very nice keep up the great work
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Date: 4/9/2010 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your " A Birthday " and wishing you a continuous success in your poem writing. Ernilando
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Date: 4/8/2010 6:47:00 PM
Congrats Carrie, on "A Birthday" being featured. Somehow grand kids make everything special. Vince
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Date: 4/8/2010 11:47:00 AM
Congrats on this selection. Menotti wrote an opera about a little boy's precious gift on Christmas night at a manger. This reminds me of the story. Enjoyed mucho. Love, daver
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 7:49:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your featured poem this week on the Soup... an excellent choice to feature and share..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/5/2010 7:48:00 AM
Carrie - many congrats on yet another of your wonderful featured pieces this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/4/2010 3:30:00 PM
Good grief, I just left a comment to you on another poem saying I could not find this one from where it was featured on the home page. I went back and saw that I only had to find the little word "comment" and click on it! it's a great poem! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/4/2010 1:18:00 PM
Carrie, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week > indeed Happy Birthday to you >> James
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Date: 4/4/2010 1:08:00 PM
This is full of joy. The meanings of all involved with the birthday, especially the blonde little boy are precious.
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