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The Bike Ride

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The Bike Ride

She twists him like a vine,
While the bike rushes.
More speed ;she hugs him tightly:
It is an ecstatic ride.

The bike roars and jolts
With the thrill never experienced.
The small pits on the road 
Jerk them with the bike.

The bike splashes beautifully
Rain water in the pits.
It is a very risky drive,
But a reduced speed both dislike.

The greatest pleasures hide
In pits of risks.

FABIYAS M V



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  1. Date: 11/23/2011 12:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in this contest today Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 9:31:00 AM
    You took us all for a ride Fabiyas. Well done. Congratulations

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:00:00 AM
    Like a vine he twisted...with a thrill he'd never...small pits in the road did jerk him with the bike..rain water pits the bike...[but a speed reduced OR but a reduced speed both] the greatest pleasure hide..

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    Date: 11/11/2011 9:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Debbie.A slight modification is done.
  1. Date: 11/3/2011 12:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 11:43:00 AM
    Wow, your pome's last two lines sum up the message so well, Fabiyas. When I was younger, we used to ride our bicycles through a state forest, sometimes going airborn after going over a tree root. I surely can relate to taking risks for the purpose of finding the greatest pleasures. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 9:38:00 AM
    Congrats Fabiyas on HM for this exquisite entry so unique my friend..enjoy honor with luv..

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 8:25:00 AM
    Reminds me of my childhood when my bike and I were one. See one, see the other. Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 5:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "1-14 any theme" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 10:22:00 AM
    Fabiyas, Enjoyed reading your exciting poem..Riding the bike down the hill through puddles and raindrops...Great moral at the end..Thanks for entering my contest..Sara

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 5:07:00 AM
    Congratulations Fabiyas on your win in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 5:00:00 AM
    Congratulation on this well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 10:14:00 PM
    congratulations, Fabiyas!

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 5:18:00 PM
    Congrats FABIYAS on your success in my Toyland contest... my winners list just posted tonight luv...

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 11:12:00 AM
    Congrats FABIYAS on your win in my TOYLAND contest with this wonderful entry luv.. HNY..

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 7:23:00 PM
    Hello Fabiyas, Beautiful asnd so well penned. Lov it As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 7:50:00 PM
    Thank you Dr.Ram.I think I have rectified it now.

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 6:06:00 AM
    no,Fabiyas I am not from kerala why do u ask...

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 4:17:00 AM
    I think you should give once over to the rhyme scheme of the sonnet, Fabiyas. merry christmas

  1. Date: 12/24/2010 12:50:00 PM
    Beautiful poem.I liked the ending very much.

  1. Date: 12/24/2010 8:24:00 AM
    There is one single risk - life. This is evidenced by the one who is born each year and will be born. Blessing for you!

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