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- You Are So Beautiful -

A Heart of strawberries Sugar and cream Magic are those moments Like the sun The night can not be extinguished As a roaring wave No beach can break Eternal owned warm friendships Feeling of being an enjoyment Who are you With stars in your eyes The white dove flying Throughout the evening glows * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 01.09.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/17/2014 1:50:00 AM

MMM... I love strawberries... great comparison to the warm feelings of love. Exquisite phrasing in this poem... who are you with stars in your eyes? I love how you never really answer the question, but leave it open to interpretation :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2014 2:26:00 AM

- So glad you liked my poem - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Timothy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Satekge

Date: 10/1/2014 2:25:00 AM

I enjoy your love poems, you always keep them so simple. Lovely read.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2014 2:28:00 AM

- So glad you liked my poem - You Are So Beautiful - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Victor :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Antony Rodrigues

Date: 9/24/2014 1:28:00 PM

This is really beautiful! It's inspiring and warmed my soul :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2014 2:32:00 PM

- So glad you liked my poem, Antony - You Are So Beautiful - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jim Mayrose

Date: 9/21/2014 8:54:00 AM

Beautifully written, I really enjoyed reading this...Thank you.....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 11:54:00 AM

- So glad you liked my poem, Jim - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nasser Alabdali

Date: 9/11/2014 4:59:00 AM

your poem touched my heart! so easy to read and extremely beautiful. you combined all natural elements to reveal the essence of beauty. I loved it. Have a beautiful day! Nasser :).

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/11/2014 5:02:00 AM

- So glad you liked my poem, Nasser - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/8/2014 12:21:00 PM

Finding beauty in nature is simply beautiful. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2014 12:32:00 PM

- A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, dear Phyllis - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Thomas Mansfield

Date: 9/7/2014 8:59:00 AM

mmmmmm such simplicity.. such beauty.. such a light and lucid message transmitted so naturally, as Mother Nature herself has done here within your words.... Thank you Anne-Lise xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2014 9:07:00 AM

- A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments Thomas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/5/2014 6:04:00 PM

Your poem is so, so beautiful. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2014 3:42:00 AM

- A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments dear Lucilla - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/5/2014 7:38:00 AM

Simply beautiful expressions of friendship and love.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2014 8:18:00 AM

- So glad you liked my poem,Monterey - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Danka Sikorska

Date: 9/5/2014 3:00:00 AM

A very romantic poem ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2014 3:01:00 AM

- Danka,thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/4/2014 2:11:00 PM

A very pretty poem Anne...Love's touch of joy..." Feeling of being an enjoyment..." I like this! J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2014 2:28:00 PM

- Justin,thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/4/2014 1:36:00 PM

You are lucky, Anne Lise, to find beauty in simple yet beautiful things. This is a short but lovely write. Much enjoyed. Thank you for giving us your pretty heart at the end of the poem:) // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2014 1:39:00 PM

- A heart can be shared with many... - thanks for your nice visit and comments, Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/4/2014 1:01:00 PM

I really missed earlier to read this wonderful poem. Glittering stars healing words you have used in perfect sense of friendships. Nicely done, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2014 1:04:00 PM

- It's never too late ..... welcome when you have time,bl - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/4/2014 10:34:00 AM

lovely stuff Anne-Lise, really puts me in mood for strawberries sugar and cream!! you put such a nice flow into this piece, excellent indeed, God bless, Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2014 11:19:00 AM

- So glad you liked my poem - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Gordon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/3/2014 2:12:00 PM

Well written, fun to read and beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2014 2:58:00 PM

- Thank you M.L. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/3/2014 12:41:00 PM

I had a need to visit you again. You are so supportive of so many of us. You are like an angel visiting everyone with your blessings. I thank you for all you do. I also added this to my favorite poem list. I hope everyone else does too.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2014 12:47:00 PM

- Really lovely words, Maurice !!! .... thanks for the visit and that you will fav. this ..... it is an honor !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nurudeen Olaniran

Date: 9/2/2014 7:27:00 AM

You are my love. that answers it. Anne this is beautiful. thank you for your comment

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 12:03:00 PM

- To sprinkle a little sugar is better than salt .... thanks for the visit and comments, Nurudeen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2014 6:38:00 AM

Ahh!! Romantic..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for your visit..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 11:59:00 AM

- A little romance for you .... thanks for the visit and comments, Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/2/2014 3:45:00 AM

With a heart like this nothing less would be expected, Anne Lise! Wonderful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 12:07:00 PM

- Nice to see you dear friend,Demetrios - thank you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/2/2014 12:08:00 AM

Wow wow wow!!!!! I think is obvious to all, that you have a very kind heart filled with strawberries!!!!! The heart you drew is soooooo beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 12:01:00 PM

- Sweet strawberry with sweet heart fit well together :)) .... thanks for the visit and comments, Arthur - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/1/2014 7:30:00 PM

this is just lovely, anne lise! i enjoyed it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 11:56:00 AM

- A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments Ilene - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 9/1/2014 2:25:00 PM

fabulous write... simple and amazingly crafted!! :") This poem deserves a two thumbs up! way to go... Have a great day ahead ,my dear Anne! ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2014 2:28:00 PM

- Two thumbs are top ..... - Nice to see you dear friend, AiyaH !!! - thank you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/1/2014 2:16:00 PM

Like the sun the night can not be extinguished. Beautiful, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2014 2:29:00 PM

- Thank you dear Faye :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/1/2014 1:23:00 PM

WoW. this poem is excellent. it is so good i swear it's as if i see a heart below it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2014 1:29:00 PM

.......your heart as proof of honesty - Thank you,Maurice ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/1/2014 12:51:00 PM

very beautifully painted picture excellent piece

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2014 12:56:00 PM

- Thank you my friend, Liam :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)