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We are all brothers and sisters born without hate Naked we were born to earth with purity and innocence as Lily Love has no barriers beyond our earthly grasp Right actions coming from the right setting, it starts from within Sometimes we feel we are living inside a bubble To live a good life, we must think, speak and act correctly Destiny paints our divine promise colors a rainbow Everything's really just small adjustments in your life The search for the true love with joy and confidence in this world Let your light shine bright, love inside the heart last forever Of life our guiding angels a choir heavenly glamor Angels over flowing universe with its clean and deep strength Written by Liam Mcdaid & A-L Andresen 11.03.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/8/2015 3:27:00 AM
This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2015 7:55:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Funom :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2015 2:04:00 PM
Your words say a lot and convey strong emotions without a lot of window dressing. Nice job. Emile.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2015 2:10:00 PM
- Thank you Emile, always a pleasure to receive a visit and comments from you - I wish you a lovely weekend- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2015 1:28:00 PM
A gem written by both of you. love phyl
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Date: 3/25/2015 1:55:00 PM
- Glad you enjoy it, Phyllis :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2015 2:42:00 AM
Lovely piece of poetry, well written, enjoyed very much!.- Best Regards!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2015 2:47:00 AM
- William, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2015 8:06:00 AM
Stunning collaboration! Such wisdom, beauty and truth in this gem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2015 12:12:00 PM
- Glad you enjoy it, Monterey :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/16/2015 8:26:00 PM
This is perfectly named. I enjoyed Truth I felt in my Heart while reading. Loved it.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2015 4:18:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, David :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2015 5:36:00 PM
I was already mentally planning a well done to Anne Lise, till I came to the very end and saw Liam's name! Would not have known it was a co-write, otherwise!! So...well done to the both of you...wise minds working in unison. /x/ paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2015 5:15:00 AM
- Thanks for visit and lovely comments, Paul :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/13/2015 12:39:00 PM
a joy to read your enlightening collab.. you light me up, anne... happy Friday and be well.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/13/2015 12:56:00 PM
- Glad you enjoy it, dear friend Nette :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/12/2015 4:17:00 PM
Another great co write Anne...beautiful...hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/13/2015 4:00:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/12/2015 12:11:00 PM
Grat collaboration..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 12:49:00 PM
- Thanks Sara, for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/12/2015 10:07:00 AM
Another write I like. Made me stop, made me smile, made me think for a while. Everything there speaks wisdom. To both of you, Anne-Lise and Liam, 7 :) Kim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 12:49:00 PM
- Kim, thanks for visiting, a 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/12/2015 9:53:00 AM
Wise perspectives! Hugs Rick.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 12:48:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/12/2015 8:38:00 AM
Very strong beautiful feeling of your nice heart expressed with beautiful words too. Genius poem. 7++ i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 8:59:00 AM
- A pleasure to share with good friends Bl - thank you - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/12/2015 8:30:00 AM
The truth may be naked BUT your verses are majestically dressed! Congratulations to both of you, Liam and Anne-Lise, Anne-Lise and Liam! A seven to each!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 8:57:00 AM
- Thank you my friend Demetrios, always a pleasure to receive a visit and comments from you - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/12/2015 5:21:00 AM
Hello Liam and Anne- Lise! Very beautiful pens! Another wonderful collaboration from you my dearest friends. Just dazzling!I love it! A huge 7 +++ to each of you! A very inspiring and promising piece about true love dreams hopes friendship life to be held very close to ones heart.smiling. A very beautiful piece with a very positive message. I enjoyed it! Truly mighty golden pens! Wishing you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you always! :) Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 5:58:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, dear friend Dorian :) - Thanks for visiting, a huge 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/12/2015 12:51:00 AM
You and Liam are a wonderful writing duo, Anne Lise! I love these beautiful words from start to end...hugs, Rhonda
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 3:45:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, dear Rhonda :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/11/2015 4:15:00 PM
Wonderful collaboration you two....Tim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 3:42:00 AM
- Tim, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/11/2015 4:00:00 PM
you write in perfect harmony Anne Lise and Liam - brilliant imagery - such a lovely flow to the lines:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 3:41:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting, a 7 and lovely comments, dear Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/11/2015 3:51:00 PM
smiling your pen flowed beautiful anne lise a pleasure writing this with you pal wishing you a blessed beautiful night
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2015 3:37:00 AM
- A new poem to our "collection" - Glad you liked the finished result - A pleasure to "share" word with you Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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