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- Hold Me Close My Sweet -

Golden enchanting warm beautiful magic falling behind mountains spell binding A setting sun bows down relinquishing her throne paints glowing amber clouds faraway in a distant horizon dreams She smiled while whispering the few very freeing words while she ran deeper into her bright future Darkening skies breathing daylights lastly sighs her last breath glistening gold dancing with the shadows rippling waves call out inside one thousand echoes Darkness slowly swallowing light silk satin ebony The little lights knew it couldn't last because evil drifts in as the shadows of the past Making way for the stars winking silver Rocked gently side to side on a smiling moon an eclipsing marriage when the sun kisses the moon golden silvery beautiful This is how we are going to be; so holy, magic and so great we carry experience with the soul and heart to create A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne-Lise Andresen :) - 02.01.2015 - Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/28/2015 8:18:00 AM

Great lines with blessed words. Thanks for the magnificient share. I hope the new year is going well so far..

Funeka Matwasa

Date: 1/18/2015 2:43:00 PM

Beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2015 2:45:00 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, Funeka :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/15/2015 6:19:00 PM

Beautiful and whimsical write from you two. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2015 4:26:00 AM

- Thank you dear Phyllis, for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Salazar

Date: 1/8/2015 4:49:00 PM

This is so beautiful and mesmerizing. Like a novel that you just hate to stop reading until you reach its climax. Very descriptive writing. I loved it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/9/2015 2:19:00 AM

- Michael, thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/6/2015 8:27:00 AM

What a beautiful collaboration! The images are spellbinding. Love the line "rocked gently on a smiling moon"

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/6/2015 8:31:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, dear Monterey :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/4/2015 12:37:00 PM

Anne-Lise, A great co-write indeed with Liam!! The result of your combined efforts is quite magical. The imagery is most enchanting. Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2015 1:31:00 PM

- Dear Gary, thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/4/2015 10:48:00 AM

Magical collaboration of two gifted poets !! Enjoyed this !! Thank you !!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2015 11:08:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, dear Debra :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/4/2015 3:13:00 AM

Great write "when the sun kisses the moon" my fav . I have written many poems on this theme twenty years back not so old that time hahaha. God bless Anne-Lise>>love...Rajat

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2015 5:22:00 AM

- Rajat, thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lei Strauss

Date: 1/3/2015 8:18:00 PM

How did you guys made this? Fantastic write! May you have a blissful new year...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2015 5:20:00 AM

- Lei, thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/3/2015 3:16:00 PM

A beautiful write, indeed. So true that we, "we carry experience with the soul and heart to create".

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2015 5:19:00 AM

- M.L. thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/3/2015 12:47:00 PM

Anne-Lise & Liam, beautiful painting, as the black clouds get to swallow the warms of the sun. Very romantic, write. 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 12:57:00 PM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Eve - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/3/2015 11:19:00 AM

"Exquisite beauty hidden in it floating with romantic rhythm. Lovely done my lovely friend. Nice collaboration. I feel 7 here. Loved always,bl"

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 11:47:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit my friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/3/2015 11:08:00 AM

wonderful collab, love the sincerity and it is truly a wondrous poem,,,Happy New Year to you both...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 11:46:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit, Harry - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/3/2015 10:21:00 AM

You two worked us up to an amazing climax of love and beauty. You write well together. Giving you both hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 10:55:00 AM

- Thank you from both of us - Enjoyable with your visit, dear Eileen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2015 9:55:00 AM

You two do good together..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 10:55:00 AM

- Thank you from both of us - Enjoyable with your visit, dear Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/3/2015 5:58:00 AM

Hello Liam & Anne Lise! This is a very beautiful and romantic poem. Excellent collaboration between you two as always! So full of love and romance, one to be held very close to ones heart, my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise. Just awesome !You're amazing poets! Great use of imagery!A solid 7 for each one of you! Your pens are truly golden! I wish you a very Happy New Year to each of you! Wish you both a wonderful day! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 6:39:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Dorian - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/3/2015 5:44:00 AM

What a melody of words! What a phantasmagoria of colors! What a dream of a writing! A seven to each! God bless you both, dear Lim and Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise and Liam!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 6:38:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Demetrios - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/3/2015 1:40:00 AM

great poem of romance and imagery AL and Liam hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 5:40:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Shadow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 1/2/2015 10:06:00 PM

A wonderfully penned collab....hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 5:40:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit, my friend Tim - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/2/2015 7:35:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your work this evening. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 5:40:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Debbie - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 2:27:00 PM

beautiful personification you two made together. How lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 5:39:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 1:36:00 PM

you two truly have pens of gold - awesome imagery my friends - you two rock! a 7 and hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/2/2015 2:14:00 PM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Jan - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/2/2015 1:18:00 PM

very beautifully drawn really anne lise your pen flowed golden in this such a pleasure thank you dear pal have a blessed beautiful weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/2/2015 2:13:00 PM

- Always a pleasure my friend Liam :) - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)