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- Burning With Love -

Falling, laughing orange sunshine Warmly comforting beams caress I was blinded for a moment Lost searching faraway grace A color the Angels have ordained ? Butterflies dancing on each heartbeat I have to feel your tender touch Cotton fingertips electric sparks embrace The days they pass so quickly now Watching night and day pass The splendid color of the sky Heavens purity through lens of one soul A blazing light upon the shores Golden treasure your light shines All of God's creation, painted with his brush Rainbow misted angel tears a bouquet promise Of life, that seems almost too much Far beyond our human brain to explain Somewhere very near, just around the corner Hope dances with the never ending dream Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 11.09.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 10/9/2015 6:01:00 AM
Your poetry are so visual and descriptive. Love it.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2015 11:49:00 AM
- Thanks Neil, for the visit and comments on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2015 12:01:00 PM
Lightened up this dull day with this poem. Fall is coming fast and the leaves are just about gone from the trees. Winter is not far behind. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2015 2:35:00 PM
- Autumn always comes too quickly :))) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments,Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/14/2015 1:23:00 PM
Great imagery Anne, Loved that line All of God's creation, painted with his brush!!! Brilliant Kevin
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2015 1:44:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 5:52:00 PM
wow, the imagery is spectacular in this one. A big SEVEN
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2015 3:15:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 1:58:00 PM
A lovely collaboration. The last two lines: Somewhere very near, just around the corner Hope dances with the never ending dream. This image is a perfect conclusion to poem~Delice
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2015 2:12:00 PM
- Always enjoyable with positive feedback, Delice :) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 1:41:00 PM
Anne-Lise, beautifully penned by two wonderful poets 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, father ~~
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2015 1:51:00 PM
- Burning With Love - a poem that I share with pleasure - Thanks for visiting and comments, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 11:06:00 AM
a rainy sunday here, anne... thanks for your feedback about my previous work!...huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2015 1:23:00 PM
- A gray and rainy Sunday here too - I wish you a wonderful new week, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 9:52:00 PM
A nice cheerful poem here! Great images! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2015 4:31:00 AM
- Thanks Matthew, for the visit and comments on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 5:51:00 PM
A fabulous collaboration A-L and Liam....you two write so well together.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2015 4:28:00 AM
- Nice to share with you, Tim - Thanks for visiting and comments on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 4:27:00 PM
I have said it before...you two write seamlessly! This poem is proof of that. Love and hope compliment one another. #7 // paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2015 4:27:00 AM
- Thank you for always beautiful words a 7, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 3:32:00 PM
Anne Lise and Liam you have such a marvelous chemistry when you write - yet another golden poem flows from your pens:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/13/2015 7:31:00 AM
Don't I know it!!!! hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2015 4:25:00 AM
- Having a great "writing partner" means a lot :) - Jan, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 3:05:00 PM
Yes, no human brain 100% true and He knows His magic how He has done with His what brush. Beautiful poem read from you my lovely lovely friend. 7 sure. Loved always, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2015 4:23:00 AM
- Dear friend Bl, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 12:08:00 PM
Anne-Lise,You and Liam have penned another beautiful work of art:-)Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2015 1:07:00 PM
- Alexis, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 10:22:00 AM
Love this collaboration Anne Lise ! I love these serene writes...have a wonderful weekend dear poet...much love, james
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2015 11:44:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, James :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 9:02:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..Great descriptive lines within..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2015 9:03:00 AM
- Sara, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 8:38:00 AM
You two write so well together. Bravo!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2015 8:43:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Richard :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 4:34:00 AM
Sparkling poetry that enchants the eyes! A seven to each, dear Anne- Lise!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2015 8:43:00 AM
- Dear friend Demetrios, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2015 2:30:00 AM
such a delightful write that celebrates life, anne.. yo and liam are unstoppable... happy saturday; still having TPS error .. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2015 8:42:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2015 4:37:00 PM
Hi Ann Lise n' Liam! Wow! A most beautiful, romantic and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it. A true golden gem!Just awesome!A very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just wonderful.I love it! Very enchanting.Great imagery! Excellent collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 to each!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2015 8:41:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Dorian :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2015 3:29:00 PM
this holds me your words sang golden thank always a pleasure sharing pens wishing you a blessed evening
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/11/2015 3:37:00 PM
- Golden treasure your words shines always, thanks my friend :) - Blessed evening to you as well :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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