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- a Night Sky -

A magical moment - a magical evening hours Mysterious melody captivates you On the grass blinks drops of the rain that has been Listening to nature's melody Today's color and light fades As a shining jewelery moon comes forth from the clouds A night sky is colored red orange in the west A blush on her cheeks when her lover whispering sweet words in her ear The night quietly and gently steals light and color for a little while But the melody is still there it fills me with confidence that nature really live The night ... perfumed with a blissful intoxication of familiarity No words - just admiration and wonder Night Jewels - life and creative power The melody - never disappears - but will change As heavenly beautiful tones promises eternal peace and love 27.03.2014 A-L Andresen :) Contest Name: A NIGHT SKY Sponsor:Nette Onclaud Deadline 4/18/2014 (6th in the contest)

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Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/8/2014 6:28:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise, What a dreamy write. So Beautiful~ Thanks so much for sharing this write with us here.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2014 12:27:00 PM

- Deborah, glad you like my poem :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/3/2014 7:49:00 AM

This has a surreal beauty. Your amazing images will linger in the mind like memories of star-lit nights

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 12:46:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting my poem "A Night Sky", Monterey - glad you liked it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/2/2014 10:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win on this wonderful descriptive write. Anne Lise. Awesome. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 2:29:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2014 5:45:00 PM

Anne, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 2:28:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/2/2014 1:05:00 PM

Oh! my lovely friend, it's a magical poem of magical adoration of changing colors in night sky promises eternal peace and love with the blissful silent melodious intoxication on the captivating night's Nature. Tremendous beauty adorned with magical colorful words. Congrats, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 1:15:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting - and greeting, my friend bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 4/2/2014 12:21:00 AM

ANNE:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 2:19:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Skat. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/1/2014 8:33:00 PM

I really loved the way you described the sights and sounds of the night. A very beautiful and creative write, Anne Lise. Congratulations on your win, as well! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 2:18:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/1/2014 5:44:00 PM

lovely and wonderful piece of work,Anne... congrats on your win..It is well deserved...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 2:17:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Olusegun. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2014 2:12:00 PM

this is truly magical as your heart's sky, anne... how gentle is a night of love ad peace-- fantastic!.. a well-deserved win in my contest!.. best cheers with huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 2:16:00 AM

- Thanks for my win, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 4/1/2014 7:54:00 AM

Truly evoke the beauty of a quiet evening fading into night. Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2014 7:56:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting - and greeting Dave. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2014 1:06:00 AM

Enjoyed the write creating a nice picture and congrats on the win, anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2014 3:13:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting - and greeting Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2014 5:05:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2014 3:12:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting - and greeting Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson

Date: 3/30/2014 11:44:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise I love the beautiful imagery in your poem. Best wishes Linda x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2014 12:37:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting my poem "A Night Sky", Linda - glad you liked it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2014 3:41:00 PM

Dear Anne Lise, This is such a creative interpretation of the evening sky's beauty. I especially love the last two lines. Who could ask for more than eternal peace and love? Wonderful, dear! Love, carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2014 4:03:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting my poem "A Night Sky", Carolyn - glad you liked it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vincent Flannery

Date: 3/29/2014 2:44:00 PM

Such a beautiful and all sense(s) awakening poem Anne Lise. As it is your inner sense of wonder and appreciation of detail that is the essence of such beauty. Thank you for reading Psalms 71:8. Psalms 71 is so powerful. Take care as God does Bless.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2014 4:02:00 PM

- Vincent, glad you like my poem :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 3/29/2014 12:45:00 PM

Stopping by to wish you a blessed weekend Anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2014 1:40:00 PM

- Hope your weekend will be springlike and beautiful,Ken my friend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/29/2014 10:44:00 AM

A Masterpiece Anne!!! Faving it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2014 11:52:00 AM

- So glad you liked my poem - Thanks for visiting and honored that you fav. it, thank you Keith ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2014 5:33:00 PM

Reads like a winner in Nette's contest..Night skies are a beauty all their own..Enjoyed reading your great description of them..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2014 9:20:00 AM

- Sara, glad you like my poem :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/28/2014 2:39:00 PM

Another beautiful jewel in the crown of your poetic style it is truly a gift to write about nature the way you do, it's a sweet softness within your lines that captures the readers and takes them on the jouney with you. Great job lady, Glad you enjoyed my Gables also loved writing something different even if it was a rewrite. cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2014 4:36:00 PM

- Glad you like my poem, Cherl :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mel Merrill

Date: 3/28/2014 11:27:00 AM

I enjoyed this and your other poems. Night is a tour de force--a pleasant tour of lavish imagery and worthwhile sentiments. I look forward to reading more! Peace.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2014 1:23:00 PM

- Always nice with visit and comments on the poems I post here - thanks Mel :)- You're welcome back when you want it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 3/28/2014 10:48:00 AM

What a supremely serene poem. I felt all the burdens of the day lifting as I read it. Beautiful words by a beautiful soul. Xx~Xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2014 1:26:00 PM

- Kim, glad you like my poem :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/28/2014 8:59:00 AM

A symphony of expressions culminating in rapturing beauty! Good Luck my dear Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2014 1:21:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting my poem "A Night Sky", Demetrios - glad you liked it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/27/2014 10:20:00 PM

This poem brought peace to my spirit, may you do well in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2014 2:33:00 AM

- I am glad that my poem gave you peace to your spirit..... - Then I have achieved something positive with my words. - Thank you, Frederic :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/27/2014 9:46:00 PM

Oh what beauty lies in the night and in your wondrous write, bravo dearest lady nature herself bows to your captivatiy words describing the night. cheri Also i need your help on comment to a poem i just posted please if you would check out one i called the gables.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2014 2:29:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice comments and visit,Cherl - I will come and read your new poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 3/27/2014 9:20:00 PM

You captured the magic of the moment, Anne-Lise! Awesome write of our heavenly universe presented in illuminating jeweled sky. Beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2014 2:27:00 AM

-Toquyen, really nice with visit and your beautiful words - Thank you :) - Love your new photo! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)