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6 Days In Limbo

After boxing day, What are we going to do, I look at you , And you look at me, Simultaneously we Say, we have 6 days free We look a little lost we have Not planned a holiday, I know Let’s go to have breakfast At the Mall We bump into Fred, and Beth, Harry, Jane and even Sall, We make small talk So as to be polite, But I’m thinking, who else We will bump into today, And who finds a table next to us But my mother and father in law, We are off till next Monday, Isn’t that grand, we can do so Much together, today is our treat, Tomorrow can be yours, I’m sick and tired of washing Dishes and dirty floors! I phoned a guest house Just by chance, wrote it on a napkin, booked immediately, got a smile and a thumbs up from my spouse. I’m determined to make the Next five days, pure fun, And make them the most, Unforgettable days of our lives! Fortunately, thank goodness, A big guest house down by the sea, Just the two of us Hun, and Nicky and Bree! We are in good spirits when we arrive, But see a dark green ranger in the drive, Isn’t that your …I begin to say, not Impossible they had no clue, they fling Open the door and spread their arms, Embrace all four of us, I must say That my mother-in-law has certain charms! They had heard us planning and saw the Napkin, phoned the guest house who assured Them there were three en suites left, We will take all three! We didn’t know who would fill all three, But were about to see! Grinning and greeting us at the door, was Tessa my sister- in- law, and her husband Deft, Who had his way of talking, sadly had a cleft. And their 4 children who immediately run To our children, put on their bathing suits, And ran to the edge of the sea, splashing Water, laughing gleefully. My father-in-law, booked my husband for chess That night, and Deft was responsible for supper. We looked at each other knowingly, Perhaps this was actually meant to be, God knew what he was doing and wanted Us to form a strong bond, we did such incredible Things together which multiplied by the score In the 5 days left, we actually grew close So much so, that each caught a doze Of flu, from the other…… All inter wound into one happy extended family, And when our goodbyes were said, We promised to see each other a lot more! First I think, as a family we should visit the zoo, This destination annually becomes less, only few, Oh, and how about another day trip to the Sea, a picnic basket and just you and me Everyone has the same idea, hello Nette, And over there is Fred and Betty, don’t fret, We start packing to leave Still have the picnic basket in tow, But it rains so we go home. Tomorrow we are taking the children to the fair, I haven’t been on a roller coaster, For years, I wouldn’t feign to try or dare. I needed Dutch courage, so trace my steps Back to a beer garden, have a cold foamy beer, Burb, and follow my family, get buckled in, We have got to the absolute crest, I throw up and it flies, all over the old dear, Sitting in front of me, but we are going so fast, She thinks it’s a bird, this roller coaster ride Will be my last, Another day written off, and 1 more day left To entertain my family, how about the circus I say, But that poor camel down there looks distraught Lets’ cross this one out, for our enjoyment Will amount to nought! It is now the day before New Years Eve, How about we shop for a dress for tomorrow night, We mustn’t forget to buy masks, Everything must be just right, Billy and Sue, our best friends, are having This New Year’s Eve do, My husband’s cell phone rings, The party is off, Sue has bad flu, And so New Year Eve arrives, and we Decide to stay home, go to the supermarket And get a ton of king size prawns, Will cook them on the braai tonight, Under the moon which is going to be bright, Play scrabble with our two sons, Say goodbye 2021 and hello new year, The future a mystery, don’t want to know, What will happen, take place or show, The future is the future, The past is the past! FOUND THIS POEM IN MY COMPLETED FILE RESERVED FOR THEM ALONE, BUT FORGOT TO POST – CHRISTMAS IS ONLY 6 MONTHS AWAY AND THIS ONE SIX MONTHS OLD.

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Date: 8/18/2022 8:00:00 AM
Love this Jennifer, the last four lines can be answered, being i am 10 month late getting here. Oh you asked on my 'Just August' poem if i was in Australia. Yes we are, Perth WA with one of our sons, 3 Grandchildren and 4 greatGC's. Like the proverbial Gypsy, have manage 3 wonderful countries, in our lifetime. My home England where i was raised, New Zealand for 36 years, and now here.. All the Best...Harry
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Date: 8/16/2022 4:59:00 PM
Ah, the best laid schemes of mice and men go oft astray... You wrote a fun travelogue of the vacation that went many places you didn't expect. Thank you Jennifer for sharing this roller coaster ride, I think I will pass on the pint of beer, lol! Hugs and blessings ~ John
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Date: 8/16/2022 12:02:00 PM
WOW!!! What a wonderful/fun~story/write. I love the ending. "The future is the future, The past is the past!" So true. Sounds like you had a wonderful night with the king size prawns. Have a great/blessed day with hugs...............
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Date: 8/12/2022 10:50:00 AM
I love going to the ocean, what a fun trip you had. Entertaining piece.
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Date: 7/20/2022 2:41:00 PM
It sounds like you had a lovely time with your family and so nice to be beside the sea. It is nice to always get away from home and make it a holiday. To bad plans were ruined with the flu. Enjoyed your family story. love phyl
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Date: 7/20/2022 12:51:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, once more your skill at writing fun writes does come to the fore. Sometimes you need time off alone, that will teach you not to write anything on a napkin, although things didn't turn out to bad. Best laid plans are better kept to yourself, says me, who can't keep a secret to save myself. I really enjoyed this wonderful read. Hugs always ..... Mike.
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Date: 7/15/2022 1:13:00 PM
You have definitely entertained us with your pleasant narration and sense of humour, Jenny! Sometimes we need to get away from everybody and recharge our batteries, so I can imagine the first reaction on finding plans ruined! Still, most dark clouds have a silver lining :) ~ Warm regards and hugs // paul
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Date: 7/13/2022 8:44:00 AM
Great share, Jennifer. Thanks for letting us know how you and your family have fun. Glad you have a family that can enjoy having time off together. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 7/11/2022 8:51:00 PM
I am now familiar with all the members of your extended family.... ! What a fun trip you had for six days ! The stay by the side of the sea must have been exhilarating. So the Christmas vacation is beautifully spent. Don't worry that this is an old poem. This is so timely as we are celebrating Christmas in July this year :) I too enjoyed your trip so much with your family, dear Jenny !
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Date: 7/11/2022 7:21:00 PM
Comments on this epic are extraneous, Jennifer. So just one word: A M A Z I N G! ~ Wow, Gershon
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Date: 7/11/2022 12:53:00 PM
And this month celebrates “Christmas in July” LOL! I’m glad you “go with the flow.” Life is too short to go otherwise and we do reminisce and laugh later in life. Be blessed, Jennifer ~ Kim
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Date: 7/11/2022 11:54:00 AM
Wonderful poem six days after Christmas to invent and enjoy life.
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Date: 7/10/2022 4:32:00 PM
It sounds like you and your family had quite a fun Christmas holiday - it is always interesting to find old poems and see how they measure up, (though this one only six months old)
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Date: 7/10/2022 4:02:00 PM
How entertaining this poem was Jennifer. Best made plans may fall by the wayside but something better may come of it. Sounds like that is what happened to your plans. Roller coasters have never been on my list. But all my daredevil kids love them. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem Jennifer. Thank you for the cheer! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/10/2022 11:22:00 AM
A fun anecdotal story about life in general Jennifer, we really don’t know what to expect from one day to another, although visiting a beer garden before getting on a rollercoaster we can probably predict, you have a mischievous sense of humour, and good for you, all the best in contest, cheers David
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Date: 7/10/2022 8:01:00 AM
A lovely story Jennifer, I always tell my wife everyday is Christmas day now we're both retired. Just back from two weeks in Turkey, found it hard going in the heat Tom
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Date: 7/10/2022 6:55:00 AM
Jennifer, your writing is brilliant and really well made, and the lines are amazing. Your poetry, my friend, is a glittering exhibition of the adorable public show and the family gathering and planning the delight of viewing the zoo or playing scrabble with your sons. I wish you all the best always.
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