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15 Pews

The Garment District Overnite City trucks slowly rumble along the street Dust Dirt DNA All powerhosed What's left suspends like your aura Perfume lingering Forgiveness falling, gliding almost unseen a golden leaf deep in the forest Resting among fellow leaves Experienced in changing seasons Cautious but not fearful Cautious but not fearful 15 Pews The backward glance the morning cast Without regret on midnight past And lives now strewn to what may be Where once the stars shone bright for thee Must gather centuries eternal dust For only darkness, graveyards trust The whistling wind, her tall tales told Of demons, dragons, warnings scold Where earthly altars blessed the few That knew their place…….the fifteenth pew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/26/2013 8:44:00 AM
I am in love with your rhymes; your couplets are brilliant. Superlative write, Jimbo :)
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Date: 9/14/2010 7:34:00 PM
Hem! A modern Shakespeare lives in Minnesota :) I love it!!!
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:49:00 AM
James, feels like there is still a story left to be told.. Enjoyed this immensely :) Wilma
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Date: 9/3/2010 6:39:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this couplet..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 8/31/2010 7:35:00 PM
This wonderful little story already sounds like a partial script to a mini movie, James! Enjoyed it. Hope all is well. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 8/31/2010 12:03:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today James. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:16:00 AM
Amazing poem James! great work of it. Enjoyed much and respect it. wonderful!
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Date: 8/31/2010 5:05:00 AM
Very interesting, there a good story in there waiting to be told, nice rhyming
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Date: 8/31/2010 4:21:00 AM
I would like to hear more of this story...sounds good!!
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