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10.11.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Tetractys Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress

1st place in the contest

A cold breath Winters night the roof beams arch Laces of ice and snow drape the planet The landscape is crowned with sparkling diamonds Roses on the window pane beauty's brow

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/23/2023 4:23:00 AM

this is a beautiful tetractys with a lot of lovely imagery, which isn't always easy to get into such a restrictive form - congrats on your win in the contest! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/20/2023 4:21:00 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on your contest top win, Anne.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/19/2023 9:12:00 PM

So beautiful. Congrats to you with this amazing write. God bless you, too. Happy Thanksgiving. Much love, Gina

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 4:28:00 AM

This is absolutely gorgeous dear anne lise, i am in awe captivated by the magical imagery that you’ve painted in such eloquence. Your words flow beautifully and the picture you’ve used here is so fitting too. I especially love “ The landscape is crowned with sparkling diamonds. Roses on the window pane. So gorgeous! Soulfully divine! Winter never looked so gorgeous before.I hope this winter keeps you warm somehow. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/15/2023 11:26:00 AM

Your pix, Anne-Lise, ouch. However, your beautiful exposé, differs greatly. Guessing it's your summer months when your celsius goes up a tad--yours is a beautiful write, Cheers. Aloha, William

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/14/2023 10:39:00 AM

This is a lovely poem as I am looking out at the snow on the roof. Melting this afternoon but will soon get more. love phyl

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2023 10:18:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I must say i miss Sunshine Smile but you are she, and she is you, its all good. Although I have never experienced this scene, to me it is perfect description of the cottage and landscape in a deep winter;s night. Hugs and blessings, JENNIFER.

Silent One

Date: 11/14/2023 12:48:00 AM

You did this form very well.. great imagery..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2023 2:09:00 AM

- S.O., thank you very much ... I really appreciate your comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/11/2023 1:54:00 AM

Excellent. Loved the imagery. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2023 10:05:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/10/2023 6:21:00 PM

you took my breath away with this dear friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2023 10:05:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/10/2023 4:06:00 PM

A beautiful winter poem, Anne. Exquisite imagery:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2023 10:04:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Daniel :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/10/2023 1:58:00 PM

Anne-Lise--you painted such an exquisite picture of winter with your words. I was in awe as I read them. The visual imagery you created was so real I felt as if I could touch the snow and feel the cold winter air. Marvelous. Am faving this for sure. Hugs, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2023 10:04:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/10/2023 1:10:00 PM

A beautiful winter scene, Anne-Lise. I love, 'Roses on the window pane' Enjoy your weekend, my friend. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2023 10:03:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Evelyn :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/10/2023 12:41:00 PM

Nicely put, Anne; I prefer my winter scenes, from a lodge window, with glass of wine in hand. I'll take the word of others, as to the wonder of the slopes. "The landscape is crowned with sparkling diamonds" -- beautiful imagery!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2023 10:03:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Joe :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/10/2023 12:23:00 PM

The scene of the snow delicately adorning the window pane is a breathtaking sight, portrayed with an exquisite mastery of imagery. This enchanting display is perfect for the contest. Blessings and best wishes to you Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2023 1:13:00 PM

- Las, thank you very much ... I really appreciate your comment :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 11/10/2023 11:34:00 AM

Beautiful scene, great for the contest. Many blessings your way my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2023 11:56:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Eve :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs