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- the Night With You -

His lips were so hot and burning against hers soft and smooth skin He draws her closer sees that she is weak Their warm bodies close together Her body glistening desires into a numb condition "My perfect rose" he whispers in her ear 20.10.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Kash Poet

Date: 1/3/2015 2:15:00 AM

:) enjoyed the poem Anne! Wish you a very very Happy New year!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2015 5:00:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, Kash! - HAPPY NEW YEAR !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucy Rose

Date: 11/10/2014 2:51:00 PM

Very intimate and sensual. Lovely. Lucy Rose xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2014 2:59:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem, Lucy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/9/2014 6:36:00 AM

You have captured a perfect, beautiful moment in time.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2014 6:39:00 AM

- Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Trinity Biles

Date: 11/8/2014 3:38:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful. -TJ

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2014 4:36:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem Trinity :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/3/2014 10:28:00 PM

Very lovely and intense, Anne Lise, quite the night portrayed.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2014 2:09:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and friendly comments, Sheri - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 10/27/2014 12:48:00 AM

How deftly and readily you cast an emotional net of longing and fulfilment. Not so many words, and none more needed.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2014 4:17:00 AM

- Thank you, Mark ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mama Bear

Date: 10/25/2014 3:31:00 PM

Would wish this to be you!!! Congratulations on the win. I know that you deserved it. Edith

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 3:36:00 PM

- No win..... no contest - but, thanks for the nice visit Edith ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/25/2014 8:21:00 AM

Beautifully sensual !!! Love it !!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 9:05:00 AM

- Thank you,Debra ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/24/2014 2:26:00 PM

Very nice passionate write Anne Lise! :) enjoyed. Best to you my dear friend! Xxxxxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2014 2:54:00 PM

- Thank you,Dorian ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/23/2014 5:28:00 PM

A beautiful piece and very passionate!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2014 2:06:00 AM

- Thank you, M.L.! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/23/2014 1:07:00 PM

So sensual and well expressed. If I might add, you might wanna change "heat" in the first stanza to "hot"... just to be more grammatically correct. Not a criticism... just pointing it out! Hope you a great day, friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 1:13:00 PM

- My English grammar is not 100% - I appreciate being corrected - thanks Timothy :) - // - thanks for the visit and comments! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/22/2014 9:19:00 PM

:)when I see this a poetry generator.. I loved it.. and now i read again same feelings it arouse!! Anne Lise Congrats.. :D!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 2:09:00 AM

- Thank you,Olive ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/22/2014 12:42:00 PM

Congrats Anne,I am happy I see this tonight;happier that it is even from you. Kudos for a job well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 1:56:00 PM

- So sweet said, thank you, Kayod5 ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/22/2014 12:21:00 PM

Wow another romantic piece from you Anne Lise. Nights are also getting colder here too and great for snuggling. lol. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 1:57:00 PM

- Dear Phyllis, thanks for the visit and comments! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/22/2014 11:44:00 AM

Anne-Lise, Very Heartfelt Congratulations on having your work selected here for "Poem of the Day." I just happened to comment on your poem here last night before the selection was announced later today. I am not surprised at all that it was selected!! Extraordinary Work!! All Best Wishes, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 11:50:00 AM

- That was lovely said, thank you, Gary ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/22/2014 10:06:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise....this is such a lovely poem; I always insist that simplicity is the key to captivating poetry, and this is one such example; the buildup exquisite....the ending most romantic! well done! /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 11:36:00 AM

- Thank you, Paul ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/22/2014 9:09:00 AM

Anne Lise, what a lovely, sensitive poem! Congratulations on poem of the day! Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 11:36:00 AM

- Thank you, Sandra ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/22/2014 7:45:00 AM

Wow, very warm and moving! Bravo on being selected the poem of the day! Please comment on my page!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 11:36:00 AM

- Thank you,Suzanne ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/22/2014 6:41:00 AM

Tender and romantic Anne Lise many congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 11:35:00 AM

- Thank you, Jan ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/22/2014 4:47:00 AM

sizzling hot piece anne lise congratulations on poem of the day beautifully painted dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 11:35:00 AM

- Thank you, Liam ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/22/2014 3:55:00 AM

Great to see this one honored.... Hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 4:01:00 AM

- Thank you, Tim ! ..... very enjoyable :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/22/2014 2:32:00 AM

Congratulations, on being chosen poem of the day with this beauty!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 2:37:00 AM

- Thank you,Maurice ! ..... very enjoyable :) - It was good news on an early morning ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2014 4:19:00 PM

A very nice love poem, Anne Lise. I love what you had him whisper in her ear.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 2:39:00 AM

- Andrea, thanks for the visit and comments! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/21/2014 3:52:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I was reading your narrative here and the first thing that jumped into my mind was both the simplicity and utter quality of this write -- and then I also thought of Mary Jo Hoose's poetry because of her similar themes -- and then I immediately saw Mary Jo's comments here below. Deja Vu!! Like Mary Jo, this one is "7" too from me. I like the ending with "My perfect rose" -- a very good touch. I marked this one as a FAV too! Best Wishes, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 2:40:00 AM

- Gary, thanks for the lovely visit, fav., 7 and comments! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/21/2014 12:01:00 PM

Desire, into a numb condition so true :) eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2014 12:08:00 PM

- Eve, thanks for the visit and comments! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)