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- Paradise Peace -

There is a place where you may rest in peace A train leaves the station Another train derails A tear falls slowly down from heaven a place A broken tear of silver it is to shine on the ground There is a place where you may rest in peace Desert without watering hole you can not manage it more A frozen rose will never pass away You know that morning will come Your eyes ask me silent Do you love me There is a place where you may rest in peace No one knows the end of life Or if there is a reason to sing - A-L Andresen :) 22.08.2014 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/5/2014 6:33:00 AM

So nicely pictured, i like ittt... A great peice indeed

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2014 6:36:00 AM

- Malik,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/31/2014 8:34:00 AM

Sad tragic images.. Well written indeed..:) hugs hugs :)/// olive eloisa GBU

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2014 8:54:00 AM

- Not sad .... just deep thoughts :)) - Olive,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker

Date: 8/28/2014 7:24:00 AM

Good morning Anne Lise, This is one of your best poems in my estimation. It is very tight and concise with dark elements. Great images. It truly has merit. Keep up the good work. Have a pleasant day. Take care. Earl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2014 7:37:00 AM

- Earl, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/25/2014 10:42:00 PM

U TIGHTrolled a heap of truth into this one. THis is no kitchen poem. THe last line is something special. NO ONE KNOWS, but everyone pretends to have all the answers to life and death's mysteries!~ WOW!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2014 3:36:00 AM

- I do not know anyone in our century who have risen from the dead ..... no one can tell :)) - JSL, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/25/2014 6:14:00 AM

Excellent poem. Very delightful to read it. Enjoyed. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2014 8:22:00 AM

- Ravi, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 8/25/2014 2:49:00 AM

Anne Lise what a beautiful Poem, so delightful to read, take care my friend............Vera............

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2014 8:21:00 AM

- Vera, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/24/2014 10:00:00 PM

A beautiful and deep write Anne...love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2014 2:32:00 AM

- Joseph, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kimberly Ruiz

Date: 8/24/2014 9:04:00 PM

What a beautiful write here. Very inspiring.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2014 2:32:00 AM

- Kimberly, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Mitchell

Date: 8/24/2014 1:32:00 PM

Wow thats was a great read. Thanks for the welcome comment. And all I can say is wow. Such a portrait of beauty and sadness. Looking forward to reading more.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2014 2:31:00 AM

- James, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/24/2014 1:03:00 PM

more peace to you, anne... congrats on all your wins with huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2014 1:19:00 PM

- Always nice to see you :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 8/24/2014 11:57:00 AM

Wow! This is a great inspirational poem my dear friend Anne Lise. I am so delighted to read this tonight. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well ( I mean, belated thanks) for your precious time visiting and commenting on my latest writes. More blessings t you and hope you have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2014 12:12:00 PM

- Thank you my dear friend Leonora .... "Good Friends are angels who lift us up when our wings have forgotten how it is to fly" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/24/2014 6:49:00 AM

Peaceful, serene, and with such a joyous feel. Striking beauty in the image of the frozen rose. Reading this made my morning.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2014 6:53:00 AM

- Dear Monterey, life counted not of number of breaths we take... but of number of moments that take our breath away :) - Thanks for your lovely visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/24/2014 12:38:00 AM

breath takingly beautiful Anne Lise hugs sry for slow reply

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2014 5:01:00 AM

- Shadow, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2014 5:27:00 PM

Interesting lyrics..Thanks for stopping by..Riding by the restaurant, there are two signs on the building one was on open the other said closed..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2014 5:00:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you,Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/23/2014 4:30:00 PM

A 7 for this one. I loved it. That is the place I want to go. Blessings always... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 4:36:00 PM

- Dear Lucilla, your friendship is like a cup of chocolate, it makes me warm and happy :) - Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/23/2014 1:20:00 PM

what joy this brings, anne... you made my coming sunday a sanctuary of peace... huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 1:24:00 PM

- A happy and cheerful heart will spread joy everywhere..... :)) - Sweet friend, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Estela Canama

Date: 8/23/2014 11:59:00 AM

Great piece and it is coming from the heart. Life is just temporary, let us treasure it! Thanks for sharing. God bless!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 12:59:00 PM

- Life is full of joys - Fill your days with color - Estela, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/23/2014 9:14:00 AM

A pensive mood that does not try to evade reality. We all know where we're heading for; perhaps we have to be more aware of pitfalls along the way. Beautiful poem, Anne Lise. /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 12:44:00 PM

- There will always be pitfalls along the way .... but, it is what we learn from - Paul, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/23/2014 9:07:00 AM

No one knows where the life will have its end, rightly said. Without fulfilling the desires, peaceful resting is impossible. But, that's not also end in itself. Nice and very nicely presented. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 1:04:00 PM

- Life counted not of number of breaths we take... but of number of moments that take our breath away :) - Bl, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/23/2014 8:51:00 AM

I liked the last two lines lot. Thanks for your kinds words. Maybe one day I will get to Norway. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 1:09:00 PM

Must luck follow you every day ...hope your life will be like a blooming summer day :) - Matthew, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/23/2014 4:42:00 AM

The heart longs for such a place and the soul in perpetuity is after it, till a day we inadvertently, find! Beautifully presented, dear friend , Anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 6:13:00 AM

- Yes, it's true my friend Demetrios - thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/23/2014 3:03:00 AM

Taoist and uniquely mystical Anne, I love poetry that's beautifully perplexing. I guess I'm saying you are a complicated Poetess. This dreamy poem tells me to live is to know Anne. " Your eyes ask me silent..." J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 6:12:00 AM

.... Thanks .... I'm blushing :))) - Justin, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/22/2014 4:16:00 PM

Sunshine...peace is sought after...Yes, it is connected to Love. Love makes everything paradise indeed. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 6:10:00 AM

- Dear Eileen,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/22/2014 4:15:00 PM

This is sad Anne-Lise....many hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/22/2014 4:17:00 PM

- Not sad .... just deep thoughts :)) - Tim,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/22/2014 3:28:00 PM

this is very poignant, deep. it is a great read thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/22/2014 4:10:00 PM

- Maurice,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)