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08.04.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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wow - total eclipse when the skies start to darken - diamond wedding ring

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/19/2024 10:45:00 AM

Had a partial eclipse here and the day just got a bit darker. Was outside as it was happening. Nice haiku to go with it. love phyl

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/11/2024 9:17:00 AM

Your Haiku eloquently depicted that exact moment, Anne-Lise. That eclipse was indeed a blessing to see.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2024 10:57:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2024 2:49:00 AM

Aptly descriptive one about the eclipse. All the pictures I have seen of it are amazing. The way it affected the world in the partial state here was eerie feeling. It lasted a long time as well with only a partial eclipse. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Did you take the picture? Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2024 3:02:00 AM

- There was no solar eclipse here in Norway... no, it's a "borrowed" picture, Sara :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/10/2024 4:26:00 PM

What an exciting day that was, Anne-Lise, You've marked it with a soulful Haiku. Loved the wedding ring! hugs~Anaya

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2024 1:57:00 AM

- Many thanks, Anaya :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/10/2024 9:43:00 AM

Very nice, Anne; have a beautiful day!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2024 12:14:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/10/2024 3:17:00 AM

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful imagery. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2024 6:02:00 AM

- Many thanks, Victor :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/9/2024 7:15:00 PM

Anne-Lise, a great haiku, there was a couple in Maine who wed during the eclipse. -Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2024 2:07:00 AM

- A wedding that had to be planned at the exact time ... the minutes were ticking - A memorable moment for a lifetime, Tania :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 4/9/2024 10:44:00 AM

I noticed that. It was a beautiful sight.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:06:00 PM

- I'm sure it was exciting minutes and beautiful to experience, Jay :) - hugs

Don Iannone

Date: 4/9/2024 9:06:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I Love your haiku! "diamond wedding ring" is great imagery! Cheers, Don

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:04:00 PM

- Many thanks, Don :) - hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/9/2024 8:43:00 AM

Yes , so many gorgeous photos like a diiamond ring! Beautiful Haiku Anne-Lise! Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:04:00 PM

- Many thanks, Heidi :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/9/2024 6:48:00 AM

I enjoyed this poem. Like some wedding bands, eclipse didn't last long.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:04:00 PM

- Many thanks, Hilda :) - hugs

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/9/2024 4:14:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I love your metaphor of a ' diamond wedding ring"!! to encapsulate the beauty of the eclipse! Great one!! Happy Tuesday xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:03:00 PM

- Happy Tuesday, Mike and thanks :) - hugs

Aurore Severo

Date: 4/9/2024 12:59:00 AM

I saw it today, amazing! xoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:03:00 PM

- You are lucky to have experienced it, Aurore :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Tonye George

Date: 4/8/2024 8:39:00 PM

It's a beautiful experience. A fight between two lovers. Nice one Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:02:00 PM

- Many thanks, Tonye :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/8/2024 6:55:00 PM

congrats Anne, shine on with this one ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:01:00 PM

- Many thanks, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/8/2024 5:22:00 PM

An amazing haiku! It is in my faves. Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:01:00 PM

- Many thanks, Evelyn :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/8/2024 5:21:00 PM

you captured that moment beautifully with your Haiku. We were fortunate enough to experience totality for 3.5 minutes. And we saw that wedding ring. Everyone here was outside watching. I heard so many ooohs and ahhhs! Thanks for your words this evening. Nicely done, hugs, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 1:01:00 PM

- You are lucky to have experienced it, Sara :) - -Many thanks :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/8/2024 2:50:00 PM

very nice image, wish there was a wedding somewhere in heavens thanks poet

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2024 12:59:00 PM

- Thanks, Yann :) - hugs