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10.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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gems in abundance the cherry tree's sacred breath - spring strewing flowers

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Date: 3/21/2024 5:43:00 AM
Anne-Lise, It's that time of year that you describe so adroitly. I'll be thinking of gems now when I look at the blossoms!
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Date: 3/15/2024 7:48:00 PM
A superb Haiku for spring. I especially enjoyed the alliteration in your final line. Be well. Brian
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Date: 3/14/2024 9:38:00 AM
Beautifully written dear Anne-Lise. hugs :)
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:02:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Linda :) - hugs
Date: 3/13/2024 10:55:00 AM
Lovely haiku and cannot wait for cherry to season to get some fresh cherries. love phyl
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:02:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Phyllis :) - hugs
Date: 3/12/2024 4:12:00 AM
I really like this one. Those cherry blossoms are beautiful as are peach trees. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:02:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 3/11/2024 1:30:00 PM
Can I call you the queen of haiku? Stunning arrangement of words my friend..
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Date: 3/11/2024 1:36:00 PM
:))) ...better than queen of poo :))) - I love writing haiku, S.O. :) - Many thanks :) - hugs
Date: 3/11/2024 11:15:00 AM
Masterfully done, dear Anne Lise.
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:02:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 3/11/2024 9:37:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, I love Haikus, and yours is exceptional, and it just proliferates with SPRING! Yes, Loved it. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:01:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Daniel :) - hugs
Date: 3/11/2024 6:04:00 AM
Awesome color and beauty to the flowers in your photo. Much enjoyed the spring exuberance you convey, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:01:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs
Date: 3/10/2024 10:14:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and photo, you do have a blessed pen for imagery.
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:01:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Eve :) - hugs
Date: 3/10/2024 6:01:00 PM
exquisite Haiku! I love cherry blossoms...they seem almost spiritual to me. Our neighbor's tree is blossoming. I sneak a peak out my window throughout the day...hope he doesn't think I'm stalking him :-) have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:00:00 AM
:))) - Many thanks for your comment, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 3/10/2024 3:35:00 PM
Yes, spring is definitely here now Anne-Lise. You captured it well in your haiku. Tom
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:00:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - hugs
Date: 3/10/2024 2:27:00 PM
Well-executed, exhibiting exquisite imagery and eloquent diction. The composition of this haiku, particularly the line "gems in abundance the cherry tree's sacred breath," is truly refined and captivating. It exudes a sense of elegance and beauty.
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:00:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Las :) - hugs
Date: 3/10/2024 1:56:00 PM
Absolutely gorgeous, i love cherry blossoms, that picture made my heart beam, and i love how youv written also this haiku especially “ gems in abundance the cherry tree's sacred breath -“ elegant and gorgeous! Makes me wonder, hows the weather there right now? Sending you light always dear anne lise, pleasure reading you always
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Date: 3/11/2024 4:31:00 AM
- Spring is in an early start phase here yet... still frost at night... the cherry tree is not in bloom yet - Thanks for the lovely comment, Ink :) - hugs
Date: 3/10/2024 1:32:00 PM
Beautiful words and beautiful picture Sunshine! Debx
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:37:00 PM
- Many thanks ... spring is beautiful, Deb :) - hugs

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