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07.02.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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snow-laden forest in dream-inspired envelopes - beauty and chaos

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/9/2024 6:00:00 AM

Wonderfully done, dear poet! Fave!

Valsa George

Date: 2/8/2024 7:12:00 PM

You always choose the apt images for your poems, dear Anne. A forest enfolds in it beauty and chaos.... how true! Great Haiku. Love and Hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 2/8/2024 10:02:00 AM

Snow covered forest with beauty and chaos. Love the picture and haiku.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/8/2024 5:29:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, Your haiku, is a stunning snapshot of winter's duality. The snow-laden forest evokes imagery of hushed beauty and tranquil silence, while the "dream-inspired envelopes" hint at unexpected secrets and hidden complexities within. The final line "beauty and chaos" perfectly captures the essence of this duality, showing us that nature can be both breathtakingly beautiful and unpredictably chaotic. - Blessings, Daniel!