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09.11.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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A November Ninette
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

3st place in the contest

Starts early with Christmas in November embers become cold the holly bush magic gone confused stop

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2023 6:06:00 AM

Back with congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/25/2023 2:42:00 PM

Aww - the holly bush magic is gone! How shall we protect ourselves from the witchcraft? Love this one dear Anne-Lise! Congratulations! :)

Marilene Evans

Date: 11/24/2023 11:39:00 PM

Congratulations. A joyful way to welcome the Christmas season. Love it. Don't think November is too early. We start the Christmas spirit in September in the Philippines, when Christmas lanterns are made and hanged.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/24/2023 8:32:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Christmas Shops" Ninette write again. A wonderful write with a fun picture. Hugs... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2023 8:41:00 PM

Thanks for trying out this form and congrats with your cute ninette

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/15/2023 11:50:00 AM

I am confused, Anne-Lise. What is that--cold, lol. That would be something for me to partake in a seldom variable, cool. Aloha, William

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/14/2023 10:37:00 AM

Well crafted for the season. The rush will soon begin and not looking forward to the shopping. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2023 1:40:00 PM

Yes, the celebration of each season is rushed now because the name of the game is sale. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/10/2023 12:25:00 PM

Nicely crafted Ninette for a merry time, wish you plenty of cash for shopping and enjoying the occasion.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/10/2023 9:28:00 AM

This is so beautiful and so well written for november theme, i love the picture you’ve used here too. Especially love “ embers become cold” ah freezingly gorgeous! Goodluck for the contest dear Anne Lise

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/10/2023 8:13:00 AM

I sense joy dwindling as the season begins too early. Hugs ~ Kim

Joyce Faure

Date: 11/10/2023 6:20:00 AM

Enjoyed very much thank you for posting

Eve Roper

Date: 11/9/2023 6:06:00 PM

Oh, my. The stories start putting out everything for Christmas a few months ago. I do try to start Christmas shopping early, but end up giving it to them before Christmas. Reads like a winner. Enjoyed reading my friend. Many blessings your way my friend.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 6:01:00 PM

Nice Ninette, Anne-Lise, good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/9/2023 4:46:00 PM

It's best to get the shopping done early, in my view. It's more enjoyable and less stressful that way. A beautiful poem and picture, Anne-Lise. hugs, Evelyn

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 3:08:00 PM

I agree....celebrating the Christmas season starts too early here as well. Along about Dec. 15th, the novelty of it's worn off. A great Ninette and good entry for the contest. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/9/2023 1:30:00 PM

A wonderful write/fun picture. Good Luck. Seems like we just did Christmas. Where does the time go??? I also did this one. Hugs... Have a great fall day writing away............

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/9/2023 1:25:00 PM

ha! yes, christmas shopping begins earlier every year and by the time december rolls around, i'm sick of all the songs they play! nice one, anne-lise!