Get Your Premium Membership

- Sweet Moon -

Silver sprinkle moving across the dreams Silhouetted by the moon O ... such a peaceful night 13.04.2015 A-L Andresen :) Kimo : three lines of 10, 7, and 6 syllables Copyright © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

123
Date: 7/14/2018 8:21:00 PM
Lovely and well crafted write . Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2018 8:50:00 AM
- Thank you so much Eve, for your very kind comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/9/2018 1:18:00 PM
A very expressive poem, Anne-Lise. Love the moon imagery. Nicely done. Love and smiles always.
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2018 1:23:00 PM
- Look at the moon, Freddie .... it's yours and mine :) -Thanks for visiting and comment, always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/10/2017 12:03:00 AM
Nice form and write, Sunshine Smile.
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2017 12:44:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Maricris :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/8/2017 1:55:00 PM
Lovely!
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2017 2:10:00 PM
- Thank you, Precioso :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2016 9:12:00 PM
Such a beautiful write Anne, meditative even and also Zen like.
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/15/2016 5:23:00 AM
- Happy you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Lenny :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2015 2:19:00 PM
I love the moon when sun is setting, s great write, Thanks for your support on my poems the one titled your for me is a little song/chorus Thank you Anne lies you have journeyed through my poems since I first came to poetry soup, and you are familiar with life trying to kick me down and seeing God pick me back up and how things have changed for the better every time..
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2015 2:33:00 PM
- It's great that you have faith in God !!! - But it is important to believe in yourself too, Diane - You and I are part "of earth puzzle" .... without you ... the picture be missing an important piece !!! - Do not let anyone "tramp" you down !!!! - - Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Diane :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2015 1:30:00 PM
Such a wonderful Sweet Moon Anne....Sharon G.
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/26/2015 1:41:00 PM
- Thank you, Sharon :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/8/2015 11:59:00 PM
That would be the perfect night for a ham-mick, the one you love, light conversation, and soft kisses. That was my first thought after reading this poem. Anne I loved the poem.
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2015 5:44:00 AM
- Always nice with positive visits and comments, thank you David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/8/2015 6:16:00 PM
This is really good. So much said in so little words. Loving it
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2015 5:44:00 AM
- Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Janet :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2015 9:04:00 AM
Very beautiful write.
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2015 12:57:00 PM
- Thank you, Archana :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/24/2015 4:02:00 PM
Wow! What a feeling of contentment and peace you evoked with only three lines!
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2015 4:34:00 PM
- Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Monterey :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2015 3:58:00 AM
nice alliteration in verse. thank you for the welcome. I can draw from your seeming serenity. Jill
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2015 4:03:00 AM
- Moon a quiet night ..... gives an inner peace :) - Thank you for really nice visit and many friendly comments from you Jill - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/21/2015 3:07:00 PM
Enjoyed much! Very serene and yes peaceful. Great job!
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2015 3:06:00 AM
- Thank you, Vincent :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2015 3:46:00 PM
An awesome write on this Kimo. Anne Lise
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2015 10:47:00 AM
- Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Phyllis :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2015 8:49:00 AM
The sky is a beautiful and changing canvas. It is nice that there are people who appreciate this art form.
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2015 8:58:00 AM
- I think it's my third Kimo - I really love to write them - Getting "said much on three lines" :)) - Thank you for really nice visit and many friendly comments from you Duke - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2015 2:24:00 AM
Congratulations Anne - Lise on this stunning Kimo. A Fav!
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2015 2:27:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it :) - Thanks for the congrats and a fav :) - I wish you a great day and a relaxed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2015 9:06:00 AM
Very beautiful descriptive write. Congratulations for Poem of the Day. Blessings and hugs sweet friend Eve
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2015 9:25:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats, dear Eve ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2015 5:05:00 AM
Lovely imagery in this fine Kimo Anne-Lise. Big congratulations on it being chosen POTD my friend! Hugs, Connie 7
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2015 5:25:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats, dear Connie ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2015 4:03:00 AM
I loved this kimo, Anne. Peaceful, serene, beautiful scene. Congrats on your POTD! Hugs! Kim :)
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2015 4:14:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats, dear Kim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2015 2:47:00 AM
Beautiful. Well penned. Hugs and kissesxxx
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2015 4:15:00 AM
- Ravi, thanks for visiting and comments, always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/15/2015 9:01:00 PM
makes me feel peaceful just reading it
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2015 4:16:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Mary - thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/15/2015 6:41:00 PM
A pleasant poem Anne...Peter.
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2015 4:16:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Peter - thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/15/2015 5:08:00 PM
A beautiful kimo Anne-Lise, So soft and dream like. Congratulations on POTD, it is well deserved with this work. Hope you are well. love Shane xxx
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2015 4:18:00 AM
- Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Shane - Thanks for the congrats! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/15/2015 3:58:00 PM
Really beautiful Anne, Well written God Bless Kevin
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2015 4:17:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Kevin - thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/15/2015 2:34:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on POD....Tim
Login to Reply
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/15/2015 2:56:00 PM
- So kind of you, my friend Tim :) - Thanks for the congrats ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
123

Book: Reflection on the Important Things