Pea shaped enemy
...When folks are young, they may feel blessed
But I coped with bullies, life felt stressed,
I started eating a lot, food always there
In theory a good thing, in my case a snare,
I ate whole box...
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Categories:
positive feedback, addiction, body,
Form: Lyric
Friendliness equals self sustaining positive feedback fruit loop
...Friendliness equals self sustaining positive feedback fruit loop
My humble apology
for inducing thee
to manure yourself
thru figurative following poop,
best flushed down the toilet
of the b...
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Categories:
positive feedback, adventure, anti bullying, appreciation,
Form: Free verse
Thank you poets
...
I found this site by chance in 2016
It became a big part of my complex life
It gave me a special place to share my writing,
a place to reach others, give support and learn new forms
I am grat...
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Categories:
positive feedback, appreciation, poets, writing,
Form: Free verse
Lifetime member
...I'm quite surprised I've written so many
a few years ago, I hadn't any :O
Now --almost three hundred in my list
the "right side of my brain" doth persist
And it's all thanks to PoetrySoup :-)
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Categories:
positive feedback, life, poems, poetess, poetry,
Form: Quatrain
I also feel blase today February 19th 2024
...I also feel blasé today February 19th, 2024
Linkedin to being lax,
and shirking house cleaning tasks,
which negligence cost us
(yours truly and the missus)
a golden opportunity
to relocate to...
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Categories:
positive feedback, angel, appreciation, blessing, crazy,
Form: Free verse
Poetrysoup
...place to meet writers
Critiquing and helpful hints
positive feedback...
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Categories:
positive feedback, poetry,
Form: Haiku
Greatest Generation
...Being privileged to have known scores of
Americans known as 'the greatest generation',
I attest to the reality of their greatness.
Herein, greatness will not reference those who went
off to war...
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Categories:
positive feedback, america, family,
Form: Narrative
On Learning To Become a Guru
...On learning to become a guru...
The following artfully crafted back in the day
(actually poetic endeavor presented below
written a few scant years ago) in response to
unexpected positive feedba...
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Categories:
positive feedback, adventure, age, appreciation, blessing,
Form: Free verse
Strictly Positive Feedback
..."Come over here guys...
What a spectacular performance!
Were the judges as impressed?
I think there's a very good chance..."
"My darling, that was FAB-U-LOUS!
It had elegance. It had style...
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Categories:
positive feedback, dance, judgement,
Form: Free verse
Mother In Biological Tongue
...dear mother,
your nurturing is so warm that my DNA denatures because of it,
but at the same time your neutral appearance reseals it.
my bonding to you is like protein structure it takes step to be...
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Categories:
positive feedback, angel, beautiful, blessing, celebration,
Form: Free verse
Weather Poem
...It's looking sunny right now on Poetry Soup! The poetry is coming in hot... but I can see some clouds of doubt hanging out there over some new writers.
So break out those cold icy laptops, bec...
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Categories:
positive feedback, poetry, weather, writing,
Form: Free verse
Well Practiced
...I generally don't write sensual poetry. But I did this for a contest on another site and it got some positive feedback so I thought I would share here.
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Hello ...
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Categories:
positive feedback, love, sensual, sexy,
Form: Rhyme
Beneficence Courtesy Nonagenarian Widower Papa
...Vitriolic scathing psychological malevolent jujitsu
cruelly, fiendishly, incriminating
lambasting opprobrium rue
teenly dished out to yours truly
mechanically engineered hatred to stew
when pa...
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Categories:
positive feedback, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Enclosed Rhyme
Voluntary Unconditional Surrender Woke
...Voluntary unconditional surrender woke...,
Viz hitting yours truly,
when yokel egghead doth jinx
whereby ye cannot comprehend figurative
wimpy vainglory, unequivocally, tectonically,
smolderin...
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Categories:
positive feedback, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Free verse
A Special Poet
...*Since Vijay always likes my Terzaenelle poems, giving special notice and positive feedback on them …I have dedicated this Terzanelle to Poet Vijay
There is a special poet, Vijay
I have met here ...
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Categories:
positive feedback, appreciation, poetry, poets,
Form: Terzanelle
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