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What Kind of Place Was This

I cursed myself for choosing such an inn.
There was a humid fog swirling all over.
What could one discover what’s there beneath?
Why did they choose a place one cannot see.

Perhaps it was my fault as I had booked the inn
A week earlier not bothering to check the place.
Yet all said it was a beautiful luxuriant country.
So I went for breakfast waiting for the fog to clear up. 

Once again, I went out onto the terrace and behold
A small Medieval village appeared below the hill.
Residents wore old fashioned clothes and all were busy
Selling fruit, vegetables, clothes and pieces of armour.

Smack in the middle of the town was a ruined castle
Which I decided to explore for fun of it, but I was stopped.
Two soldiers pointed lances at me and conducted me
To the most luxurious hall filled with mirrors and old weapons.

I was told to wait on a chair until judgement would be pronounced
Time passed and from outside I head a dirge of a condemned man.
This must be a farce I thought but waited patiently as night fell.
Finally I got up and managed to get out of there and ran to the inn.

No lights appeared below. And I was hungry no more.
Next day I woke and from my window I saw the fog again.
What farce was this, it was never mentioned in the brochure.
Soon the fog lifted only to see an empty verdant vale.
Was it a dream?  I quickly packed and flew back home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Skelly Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 5:15 AM
Tantalizing medieval mystery...Delice
Poet Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 7:12 PM
A delightful story Victor, immersed in the surreal world of dreams. Your imaginative energy has resulted in the writing of an engaging story. Enjoyed.
Seeker Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 6:19 PM
A haunting tale! Enjoyed :)
Fowler Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 7:09 AM
A delightful tale Victor, steamed in dream-like imagery. Linda
Roper Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 2:58 PM
Enjoyed reading my friend.. you have a great imagination
Kitchin Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 2:27 PM
Victor, a captivating story.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 11:09 AM
It could only happen in your dreams and what a dream it was, enjoyed the entertaining read very much Victor … Belle
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Fantasy poetry. Medieval dream-like, Victor!
Horsman Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 10:12 PM
Oh love this. Victor, your dream makes for wonderful poetry.
Buehler Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 12:10 PM
I think the fog had something to do with the strange goings on. I enjoyed your latest captivating tale, Victor. So mysterious! :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 10:25 AM
Apprehensive and descriptive work you have penned in this one. What imaginative lines are contained within. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara
George Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 6:52 AM
What an eerie feel and what mysterious surroundings. You have the ability to make the experience feel so real. Great penning, dear Victor !
May Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 5:03 AM
An enchanted inn where ancient ruins seem to appear, Very nicely penned Victor
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 4:50 AM
Your creative spirits have penned this dreamscape. Intriguing story, Victor.
Proxenos Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 2:00 AM
I would have done exactly what you did,pack and fly back home. it sounds as if it was a haunted place to me. very well penned though. Hugs and blessings, JENNIFER.
Tor Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 10:55 PM
Such creativity from you Victor to dream all this up. Incredible picture reflecting what you saw and experienced. It's wonderful to read my friend... Your imagination is amazing...
M  Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 10:22 PM
What an interesting poem and place Victor! Let’s hope it was a dream! Cuddles….Debx
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