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Tomorrow's Flowers

Across the Sprawl of wistful Fall Through capricious Skies of broken Lies Naive sweets leave tongues of the young As the last leaf of summer dies To Escape the Scrape of leather feathers And Trim the Rim from fallow snows Tomorrow's Flowers count the Hours In the Bleak Mystique of departing crows Where the cold unfolds Tracks of wolf Packs The remains of rain Returns the Ferns Despite the Spite of cynic's delight The wheel of days tenaciously turns When a green dream Soars through golden Doors Each Sunset will Reset a pristine dawn As Tender as April's fragile Splendor Hope Stands as Grand as a fresh-eyed fawn. 11/15/20 In Rhymes Sublime contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 2/28/2021 5:55:00 PM
After being away from this site for so long, I missed a lot of quality poetry. I have to include this one in that category.
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Date: 12/30/2020 8:43:00 PM
This is wonderful, Michelle. Loved the internal rhymes , imagery, and flow. I'm a sucker for the cycle of the seasons, so well expressed.
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Date: 12/14/2020 3:30:00 PM
Michelle: This is awesome, truly remarkable. The imagery alone makes it exceptional. Congratulations! Paul
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" story/write. I love the colorful line, "When a green dream Soars through golden Doors." Enjoy your win and day...............
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Date: 11/20/2020 10:14:00 AM
"Sprawl of wistful fall" what a great opening line Michelle. Your lines are as rich in diverse images as a pile of colorful fall leaves with the flow of the gentle breeze of hope for April. As always, beautifully done my friend! Congratulations! All the best!
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Date: 11/19/2020 5:56:00 PM
amazing imagery, Michelle. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 11/19/2020 11:04:00 AM
Michelle what a delightful poem and a so deserved win - congratulations my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/19/2020 8:51:00 AM
Beautiful write Michelle, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/19/2020 8:06:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and rhyming Michelle. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/17/2020 8:18:00 PM
Michelle, the metaphoric beauty of your poem dances gracefully with your brilliant internal and end rhymes. Every line is alive with amazing imagery and word play. I especially loved; "The remains of rain Returns the Ferns" and "Hope Stands as Grand as a fresh-eyed fawn." - my heart's imagination swoons into the arms of your poetry. Let me return the compliment to you and say that you are a poet I both admire and envy as well! A fav! Best wishes for a win, my friend, and warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/17/2020 3:42:00 AM
Your poetry is flowing beautifully, and hope should always float on pristine ground, love your verse today, have a wonderful day dear friend.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/17/2020 2:50:00 PM
And you as well, so happy as always to hear from you :)
Date: 11/16/2020 4:00:00 PM
Beautifully written, Michelle. Nature's beauty resonates with your words :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/17/2020 2:49:00 PM
Nature always inspires me, thank you so much!
Date: 11/16/2020 11:40:00 AM
Ditto Carolyn! Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/17/2020 2:49:00 PM
Thanks, Rico, always glad for your visits!
Date: 11/16/2020 11:09:00 AM
You are blessed with the ability to make images come to life, Michelle. The rhyme is perfect, but I love the imagery of the last leaf dying and the tracks of wolves in the snow. Breathtakingly beautiful! If I were judging this contest, your poem would be hard to beat. Best wishes in the contest. A fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/17/2020 2:48:00 PM
Your generous comments and warm hearted encouragement touches my heart, Carolyn, you are such a sweet soul :)
Date: 11/15/2020 8:48:00 PM
This is vintage wordplay from your seasoned pen, Michelle. One after another the phrases roll off the tongue 'capricious skies of broken lies', 'bleak mystique', and 'as tender as April's fragile splendor' are standouts to me. The arc from fall through winter into the soaring green dream of spring is a glorious one, ending with the grand hope of a fresh-eyed fawn. A marvelous trek through the seasons with Tomorrow's Flowers being the totem of a future hope through inclement weather. A fav ~ John
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John Watt
Date: 11/15/2020 10:17:00 PM
I'm honored to have been a part of your creative process, Michelle. Have a great week.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/15/2020 9:02:00 PM
Actually the original version was much more dark, but I ultimately wanted to end on a hopeful note - by the way, the part about the fawn was inspired by the soupmail you sent my a while ago, about seeing the fawn and remembering a piece of ESVM's poem - so thank you again, you never know where inspiration will come from :)
Date: 11/15/2020 7:09:00 PM
I love internal rhyme gives it a musical feel, well done Michelle, feels like a winner!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/15/2020 8:53:00 PM
Thank you for your warm comment and the visit, very much appreciated~
Date: 11/15/2020 4:43:00 PM
These rhymes are indubitably sublime, Michelle. G.L. in the contest! Best always, Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/16/2020 1:58:00 PM
Nice of you! ~ Aloysius
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/15/2020 8:52:00 PM
Your wishes are delicious, gw (trying for a slant rhyme there!)
Date: 11/15/2020 3:28:00 PM
Hi Michelle, You penned such a splendid entry for contest. I love nature writes! Your metaphors, imagery, rhymes and content were top notch. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/15/2020 3:47:00 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed it, Alexis, hope your day is good as well!

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