The Peach Tree

They would ripen all at once
under a hot sun and hang
in a sugary glut only for a day 
or two before starting to spoil. 
I had to be quick and when
the time came, 
I hurried home
from school to clamber up
the tree and seize 
the fruit. Each was a warm, 
engorged globe of flesh 
with just a hint of give 
when a finger was pressed 
into skin.
No command, 
not even from God,
could have held back a bite.

Mouthfuls of sweet peach
sent every pleasure bud
on the tongue into a spasm 
and spilt the overload 
oozing out of the corners
of stretched lips. 
Great gulps 
were hurried down the throat 
to make room for another bite. 
No savoring restraint held
me back, this was volume.
All afternoon
my face and hands 
dripped a sticky syrup,
coating my shirt.

Finally I would have my fill
and sit bloated beneath
the tree surrounded 
by peachstones some still
encased in leftovers 
of pinkish flesh. Sorry evidence
to convict. Afterwards, 
a terrible remorse always
took hold. Next day 
I thought my stomach ache
was punishment from above.
Every year of my childhood,
in the heat of late summer, 
I repeated the same sin,
suffered the same consequence,
hoped for forgiveness 
from a wrathful God.
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Crandall Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 10:42 AM
That's the best description of eating a peach I can imagine, and a great memory of being a kid and eating them. I can't wait until peach season.
M  Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 11:47 AM
Lovely to see you got POTD Paul….so well deserved! Debx
Lane Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 2:43 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Paul. I'm fairly certain you were forgiven, since it wasn't an apple tree, and you were not charmed by a satanic snake to indulge. You're guilty by your own admission, so a repentant young boy learned his lesson with the penance of a tummy ache... until the next summer. ;-)
Lane Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Oh, sure. We would've cleaned that tree and then both gotten sick. Worth it? Oh, yes!
Willason Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 4:40 AM
You are such a kind hearted judge my dear Lin...you would have been a splendid companion to ease my bad conscience back then. As always, treasure your visitations with your gifts of wisdom.
Romios Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 11:20 PM
A much needed, POTD, Congratulations and cheers, GOD BLESS ALL OF US, Pangie xx
Willason Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 4:31 AM
Pleased to receive your kind words Panagiota. My thanks for spending some if your time in the poem...a welcome guest. Take care...
Scott Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 11:11 PM
This is a glorious plea for God's forgiveness, and yet the very gift of the fruit an indication of his generosity and pleasure. I was completely wrapped up in your colourful description, feeling every moment of joy and remorse. I feel too I must now wash my vicariously tacky hands and wipe my chin! Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day very well deserved, long overdue :)) Blessings
Willason Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 4:28 AM
So grateful for your considered and thoughtful comments Sam...interesting to learn how a poem interacts, your feedback quite rich in this regard for which I am honored. Such support matters and sets a little joy reverberating in he silence. Many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:02 PM
God does supply ! All you did was enjoy some fruit from a tree that He provided. :) Peaches are sooooo yummy. This has happened to me many times: ' face and hands dripped a sticky syrup. ' Your thoughts bring back so many memories, indeed. Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 8:47 PM
Now there's a worthwhile take...how creative your mind dear Brandy...I was just availing myself of the creators delicious gifts...how could I refuse. Pleased to stir up some pleasant memories. Thankyou Brandy for yr kind words.
Schatz Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:01 PM
I can almost taste it. I like how the gluttonous pleasure is followed by remorse. Congrats on POTD!
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 8:40 PM
Thanks Robert....looking for a way to opt out of this wretched cause and effect rule...still looking. Thanks Robert for yr comments.
Lawless Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 3:47 PM
there is none more vindictive than the Hot Summer Peach God.....and yet.....we beg forgiveness knowing the Peach demon will come again....nice tasty write Paul
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 8:37 PM
I know...offered to pay for a holiday for both of them..get em off my back. No deal. Many thanks John for your out of left field comments, amusing as always. Take care my friend.
Bowring Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 3:15 PM
Many congratulations Paul with POTD with this scrumptious poem! I love peaches and reading your mouthwatering words were delicious indeed. You described the tree and what it offered so well. The guilt and effect it had the next day made me smile for although you knew the outcome of having too much of a feast you would still return the next year to repeat the banquet of peaches! An enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. :):)
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 8:33 PM
What wonderful and considered comments Christina...thankyou for taking the time to put together your thoughts. In some ways the poem has an undercurrent just below the pleasure driven feast. Still would have no hesitation in chomping into the fruit. All the best, Paul
Slaughter Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 11:10 AM
I've never picked a peach, Paul, but I love the imagery in this delightful piece. Congrats on POTD, as well.
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 8:26 PM
O Jim...you don't know what you missed...have you neighbours with a tree you can raid. Seriously, very much appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 10:30 AM
Mouthfuls of sweet peach sent every pleasure bud on the tongue into a spasm… as the orgasmic sweet is continued in sensual tones. Perhaps natural consequence, perhaps even a smile from your Father in heaven. Congratulations on POTD, Paul! Enjoyed very much!
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 8:23 PM
I am sure I carried a redeeming boyhood innocence that would have been viewed kindly. But o boy...those peaches still cause memory to accelerate the heartbeat in anticipation. Many thanks Kim for yr comments.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 10:15 AM
- Quantities have consequences ... I know from experience very well :))) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Paul -
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:37 PM
Worth the pain dear Anne-Lise for just another mouthful....fruit never tasted better. Many thanks for yr kind words....
Cunningham Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 8:49 AM
An enjoyable read Paul, I can just taste those mouth watering peaches. Congrats to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:34 PM
Thanks Tom...interesting to note that there seems an almost instinctive and tribal memory of fresh fruit from the tree. Long may it grow. Kind regards,Paul
Baker Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Paul! It was delicious and brought back pleasant memories of my youth. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. Bill
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:32 PM
An honor to stimulate some pleasant memories Bill...so many of us share in the recollection of backyard fruit, the taste and shere pleasure. Take care, Pul
Fowler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:39 AM
Nothing fresher than straight from the tree. Thanks for the memories with this POTD. Congratulations! :)
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:29 PM
Indeed...a pleasure becoming more scarce with handkerchief sized backyards...ah memories !. Many tganks for yr comments Linda.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely story/write. Love your line, "Mouthfuls of sweet peach." What a dish in the summer. Have a blessed day writing away........................
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:26 PM
Hi Paula....thankyou for your gracious comments. So pleased that the poem was a worthwhile read and prompted yr kind words. Regards, Paul
Rodgers Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Dear Paul, Your excellent descriptions and reflections on childhood indulgence and consequences show a nostalgic and evocative picture that truly captivated my imagination. I was particularly struck by your candid portrayal of the aftermath – the sticky syrup coating your shirt, the remorseful reflection beneath the tree surrounded by peach stones, and the inevitable stomach ache that followed. Your honesty in confronting the cycle of indulgence and consequence and the yearning for forgiveness is quite striking. Congratulations on being selected for the Poem of the Day. –Blessings, Daniel
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:22 PM
So grateful Daniel for your thoughtful and meaty comments. Such experiences informed childhood of the relationship of pleasure and pain, the moment and the time wake that follows. Indeed value yr time in putting your words together and for reading the poem.
Horn Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:24 AM
Must have been while you were in Georgia with Georgia on your mind while picking peaches. Much feeling and meaning.
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:12 PM
Very much appreciate yr comments James. Never been to Georgia....memories come out of the hot summers of Southern Australia. Georgia obviously known for its peaches... Kind regards, Paul
Kaufman Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:17 AM
Dear Paul, what a delightful poem and so worthy of POTD. You have mastered the senses and left the reader salivating for a succulent peach.
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:09 PM
Forgive me Nacy for being such a tease...if I could materialise a peach from memory I would deliver to your door. Many thanks for your comments, grateful.
Elless Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations on Your POTD, Paul. Wow, nothing like ripe, juicy peach. They are Delicious—sticky face and fingers. Love them. Have a great Day
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:46 PM
Thanks RJ. Seems we all have fond memories of fresh fruit plucked from the tree...almost a universal symbol of pleasure.
Kitchin Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Paul, a wonderful poem, I can smell the ripe peaches. Congratulations on POTD!
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:43 PM
Value yr comments Tania...pleased that the aroma jumped from the page. Ah fresh peache perfume on a warm wind !
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 2:11 AM
I was waiting for a large tub of fresh cream to come along, and totally gluttonise the senses, but by the end I was totally satisfied if not a little queasy, you suffered for your sins, lol! great poetry Paul, and a well deserved POTD! Cheers David
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:25 PM
Thanks David. Nothing tasted better than fruit off the tree...can't be equalled at least not by the pretend stuff in supermarket bins. Would be willing to suffer again for one bite of those heavenly fruit. So grateful for yr comments David.
Edmonds  Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:41 AM
Nothing tastes as sweet as fruit fresh from a tree, those were the days when one could clamber up for a feast. Enjoyed the read, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day Paul… Beryl
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:19 PM
Such gave so much to the experience of childhood, its simple pleasures, the delights of having a backyard with its bounty. Many thanks Beryl...a pleasure to stimulate good memories. Regards, Paul
Williams Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 12:54 AM
Oh my goodness Paul, I can identify with your story, just like you and Sara below, we did the same thing. Climbed up the plum and the pear tree and ate the fruit to our hearts content - without remorse, I may add. I guess because we had so much of a glut of those fruits, they have lost their charm now. Great write and congrats on being awarded the POTD - Maria
Willason Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:14 PM
A chorus of memories by so many...shared experience of those days in the backyard. How alive and immediate the privilege of having abundance hanging on a branch. Appreciate yr thoughtful comments Maria
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