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The Peach Tree

They would ripen all at once under a hot sun and hang in a sugary glut only for a day or two before starting to spoil. I had to be quick and when the time came, I hurried home from school to clamber up the tree and seize the fruit. Each was a warm, engorged globe of flesh with just a hint of give when a finger was pressed into skin. No command, not even from God, could have held back a bite. Mouthfuls of sweet peach sent every pleasure bud on the tongue into a spasm and spilt the overload oozing out of the corners of stretched lips. Great gulps were hurried down the throat to make room for another bite. No savoring restraint held me back, this was volume. All afternoon my face and hands dripped a sticky syrup, coating my shirt. Finally I would have my fill and sit bloated beneath the tree surrounded by peachstones some still encased in leftovers of pinkish flesh. Sorry evidence to convict. Afterwards, a terrible remorse always took hold. Next day I thought my stomach ache was punishment from above. Every year of my childhood, in the heat of late summer, I repeated the same sin, suffered the same consequence, hoped for forgiveness from a wrathful God.

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Date: 4/13/2024 10:42:00 AM
That's the best description of eating a peach I can imagine, and a great memory of being a kid and eating them. I can't wait until peach season.
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Date: 3/4/2024 11:47:00 AM
Lovely to see you got POTD Paul….so well deserved! Debx
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Date: 2/23/2024 2:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Paul. I'm fairly certain you were forgiven, since it wasn't an apple tree, and you were not charmed by a satanic snake to indulge. You're guilty by your own admission, so a repentant young boy learned his lesson with the penance of a tummy ache... until the next summer. ;-)
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/23/2024 5:59:00 AM
Oh, sure. We would've cleaned that tree and then both gotten sick. Worth it? Oh, yes!
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/23/2024 4:40:00 AM
You are such a kind hearted judge my dear Lin...you would have been a splendid companion to ease my bad conscience back then. As always, treasure your visitations with your gifts of wisdom.
Date: 2/22/2024 11:20:00 PM
A much needed, POTD, Congratulations and cheers, GOD BLESS ALL OF US, Pangie xx
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/23/2024 4:31:00 AM
Pleased to receive your kind words Panagiota. My thanks for spending some if your time in the poem...a welcome guest. Take care...
Date: 2/22/2024 11:11:00 PM
This is a glorious plea for God's forgiveness, and yet the very gift of the fruit an indication of his generosity and pleasure. I was completely wrapped up in your colourful description, feeling every moment of joy and remorse. I feel too I must now wash my vicariously tacky hands and wipe my chin! Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day very well deserved, long overdue :)) Blessings
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/23/2024 4:28:00 AM
So grateful for your considered and thoughtful comments Sam...interesting to learn how a poem interacts, your feedback quite rich in this regard for which I am honored. Such support matters and sets a little joy reverberating in he silence. Many thanks.
Date: 2/22/2024 9:06:00 PM
vivid and nostalgic - a pleasurable read
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/23/2024 4:18:00 AM
Thanks Mat...appreciate you taking the time to read the poem and to comment.
Date: 2/22/2024 7:02:00 PM
God does supply ! All you did was enjoy some fruit from a tree that He provided. :) Peaches are sooooo yummy. This has happened to me many times: ' face and hands dripped a sticky syrup. ' Your thoughts bring back so many memories, indeed. Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 8:47:00 PM
Now there's a worthwhile take...how creative your mind dear Brandy...I was just availing myself of the creators delicious gifts...how could I refuse. Pleased to stir up some pleasant memories. Thankyou Brandy for yr kind words.
Date: 2/22/2024 6:01:00 PM
I can almost taste it. I like how the gluttonous pleasure is followed by remorse. Congrats on POTD!
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 8:40:00 PM
Thanks Robert....looking for a way to opt out of this wretched cause and effect rule...still looking. Thanks Robert for yr comments.
Date: 2/22/2024 3:47:00 PM
there is none more vindictive than the Hot Summer Peach God.....and yet.....we beg forgiveness knowing the Peach demon will come again....nice tasty write Paul
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 8:37:00 PM
I know...offered to pay for a holiday for both of them..get em off my back. No deal. Many thanks John for your out of left field comments, amusing as always. Take care my friend.
Date: 2/22/2024 3:15:00 PM
Many congratulations Paul with POTD with this scrumptious poem! I love peaches and reading your mouthwatering words were delicious indeed. You described the tree and what it offered so well. The guilt and effect it had the next day made me smile for although you knew the outcome of having too much of a feast you would still return the next year to repeat the banquet of peaches! An enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. :):)
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 8:33:00 PM
What wonderful and considered comments Christina...thankyou for taking the time to put together your thoughts. In some ways the poem has an undercurrent just below the pleasure driven feast. Still would have no hesitation in chomping into the fruit. All the best, Paul
Date: 2/22/2024 11:11:00 AM
Hurray! I get a rush of joy when I pop into POTD and see your poems! Always so well deserved :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 8:28:00 PM
Equally, I get a rush of joy when you post yr comments DD...such a friend.
Date: 2/22/2024 11:10:00 AM
I've never picked a peach, Paul, but I love the imagery in this delightful piece. Congrats on POTD, as well.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 8:26:00 PM
O Jim...you don't know what you missed...have you neighbours with a tree you can raid. Seriously, very much appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 2/22/2024 10:30:00 AM
Mouthfuls of sweet peach sent every pleasure bud on the tongue into a spasm… as the orgasmic sweet is continued in sensual tones. Perhaps natural consequence, perhaps even a smile from your Father in heaven. Congratulations on POTD, Paul! Enjoyed very much!
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 8:23:00 PM
I am sure I carried a redeeming boyhood innocence that would have been viewed kindly. But o boy...those peaches still cause memory to accelerate the heartbeat in anticipation. Many thanks Kim for yr comments.
Date: 2/22/2024 10:15:00 AM
- Quantities have consequences ... I know from experience very well :))) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Paul -
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 7:37:00 PM
Worth the pain dear Anne-Lise for just another mouthful....fruit never tasted better. Many thanks for yr kind words....
Date: 2/22/2024 8:49:00 AM
An enjoyable read Paul, I can just taste those mouth watering peaches. Congrats to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Tom...interesting to note that there seems an almost instinctive and tribal memory of fresh fruit from the tree. Long may it grow. Kind regards,Paul
Date: 2/22/2024 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Paul! It was delicious and brought back pleasant memories of my youth. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. Bill
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 7:32:00 PM
An honor to stimulate some pleasant memories Bill...so many of us share in the recollection of backyard fruit, the taste and shere pleasure. Take care, Pul
Date: 2/22/2024 7:39:00 AM
Nothing fresher than straight from the tree. Thanks for the memories with this POTD. Congratulations! :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 7:29:00 PM
Indeed...a pleasure becoming more scarce with handkerchief sized backyards...ah memories !. Many tganks for yr comments Linda.
Date: 2/22/2024 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely story/write. Love your line, "Mouthfuls of sweet peach." What a dish in the summer. Have a blessed day writing away........................
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 7:26:00 PM
Hi Paula....thankyou for your gracious comments. So pleased that the poem was a worthwhile read and prompted yr kind words. Regards, Paul
Date: 2/22/2024 7:14:00 AM
Dear Paul, Your excellent descriptions and reflections on childhood indulgence and consequences show a nostalgic and evocative picture that truly captivated my imagination. I was particularly struck by your candid portrayal of the aftermath – the sticky syrup coating your shirt, the remorseful reflection beneath the tree surrounded by peach stones, and the inevitable stomach ache that followed. Your honesty in confronting the cycle of indulgence and consequence and the yearning for forgiveness is quite striking. Congratulations on being selected for the Poem of the Day. –Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 7:22:00 PM
So grateful Daniel for your thoughtful and meaty comments. Such experiences informed childhood of the relationship of pleasure and pain, the moment and the time wake that follows. Indeed value yr time in putting your words together and for reading the poem.
Date: 2/22/2024 5:50:00 AM
You should send this to the governor of Georgia, maybe they'll adopt this one for their own. Awesome POTD Paul
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 7:16:00 PM
Many thanks Tom for yr kind words. As mentioned to James below, Georgia is a few miles away from childhood Adelaide in South Australia. I am sure the peaches there are memorable. Take care...
Date: 2/22/2024 5:24:00 AM
Must have been while you were in Georgia with Georgia on your mind while picking peaches. Much feeling and meaning.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 7:12:00 PM
Very much appreciate yr comments James. Never been to Georgia....memories come out of the hot summers of Southern Australia. Georgia obviously known for its peaches... Kind regards, Paul
Date: 2/22/2024 5:17:00 AM
Dear Paul, what a delightful poem and so worthy of POTD. You have mastered the senses and left the reader salivating for a succulent peach.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 7:09:00 PM
Forgive me Nacy for being such a tease...if I could materialise a peach from memory I would deliver to your door. Many thanks for your comments, grateful.
Date: 2/22/2024 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on Your POTD, Paul. Wow, nothing like ripe, juicy peach. They are Delicious—sticky face and fingers. Love them. Have a great Day
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 6:46:00 PM
Thanks RJ. Seems we all have fond memories of fresh fruit plucked from the tree...almost a universal symbol of pleasure.
Date: 2/22/2024 3:45:00 AM
Paul, a wonderful poem, I can smell the ripe peaches. Congratulations on POTD!
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 6:43:00 PM
Value yr comments Tania...pleased that the aroma jumped from the page. Ah fresh peache perfume on a warm wind !
Date: 2/22/2024 2:35:00 AM
returning, Paul, to congratulate you on your POTD designation. My mouth is drooling after having read your poem. :-)
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/22/2024 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Sara..good to hear from you again...keep drooling !
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