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September Sonnet

Scent of change upon the breeze, as we bid farewell to Summer. Hear the softly spoken murmur, of leaves changing in the trees. The cooler nights begin to tease, as we reach for blankets, warmer. We try to stave off Winters rumour, in the last warm days we seize. The moon's harvest ring shines bright, seems to be made of a bed of talcum. Homes are sheltered, windows shut tight, yet emit a feeling of welcome. Wood smoke lends its flavor to night, as I walk in the birth of Autumn. For the contest; September-Your Choice Sponsored by Brian Strand Placement: 1st

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Date: 9/21/2011 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's sponsored contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 12:48:00 PM
My compliments Paula on a beautiful Sonnet poem, I love your last line "I walk in the birth of Autumn" is there anything more sublime than walking in Autumn and a big congratulations on your first place win ~~
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:37:00 AM
CONGRATS PAULA ON FIRST PLACE WIN .. EXCELELNT MY FRIEND..LUV..
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Date: 9/18/2011 6:50:00 AM
so lyrical and undulating, paula... congrats on your top win!.:) huggs
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:03:00 AM
Paula, I love the gentle change in this poem, beautiful. Well done. E
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations Paula. A lovely sonnet sensing the changes in the air.. cheers Marg
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Date: 9/17/2011 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your stellar win with this spectacular sonnet!!!-------Lori
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Date: 9/17/2011 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your glorious win. Monumental, intriguing, great!
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:43:00 PM
You definately captured the essence of the season Paula. Congratulations on your well deserved first place
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:11:00 PM
Paula, a superb win, worthy of the glory. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:49:00 AM
Am so glad to read this one..missed it first time around...congrats..I love the line about the wood smoke..brings back so many memories..BG
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Brian, Paula
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:36:00 AM
This is just beautiful and Congratulations on your first placement in Brian's contest.
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:40:00 AM
Good luck in the "September" poetry contest as Brian judges. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 6:00:00 PM
A truly lovely sonnet Paula, best of luck in the contest and thanks so much for my placement in you Driving contest, I am very honored and proud~~
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Date: 9/6/2011 1:03:00 PM
Paula you so a great sense of skill in this style my friend just thought id swing by this sandbox to read a true friend and talent really great write as smooth and relaxing as a Septemper evening Cheers and stay crazy Gonzo
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:30:00 AM
Your poetry is always a pleasure to read no matter what you are writing about Paula. Enjoy your weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2011 8:56:00 PM
What a gorgeous poem of changing seasons!! Makes one love the month of September!
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Date: 9/1/2011 7:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this very descriptive fall work..Reads like a winner ..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 9/1/2011 6:54:00 PM
Fine write,paula.Good luck to you in the contest..I love this...
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