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Oh pride, pride, I do have pride
Pride of my country, pride in my siblings, and my nephews and niece
I am proud of me too, I am a survivor, proud of every single word that I pen ~
Think, if one had zero pride what would we be 
So, to me  a certain amount of pride is okay
Cloud my judgement not    head up in every downfall   able to stand proud . . 

Oh greed, greed, it can be excessive
The need for material things, such as money, cars, symbols of wealth
I work hard so I can live in this nice Victorian apartment ~ 
Have food to eat, even indulged in a big screen television
Does that mean greed?  No simply, rewards for hard work
An always seeking    putting things before this life   the need is endless . . . 

Oh lust, lust, that sweet desire for love and power 
Within each of us is this need to love and to be loved, to have
For me lust is fine as long as it is two-sided ~
Not directed at someone who does not return the love. 
That is just unnatural, and the need for power, being number one is wrong
Oh I recall him    the deep love and sweet passion    at his tomb I weep . . .

Oh anger, anger, that wrath that involves many feelings
It is a useless emotional response, a hurt
We feel violated and it triggers the fight brain response ~
Wanting revenge with hasty and sudden responses
Thankfully in my life, I just walk away
Negative feelings    silence    poison pen  gossip    I just turn away . . . 

Oh gluttony, gluttony, over-indulgence
Guilty at Christmastime for sure, I over did it at dinner
And I did gulp down that box of chocolates given as a gift ~
But that is not everyday and I do give food to the poor
Well maybe me and my friend did gulp down buttered popcorn at the movies
I saw a man lost    and gave him my chicken meal    I had more at home . . .

Oh envy, envy, you green eyed monster
If it creates hate that is bad but it can create striving to be better
Make one want to be better, do better, accomplish more ~
To envy and admire another is fine, but to want to topple them so wrong
Go about making a plan on how to defeat them, is wrong, wrong
Outdo and undo    deep emotional thoughts    be happy with you . . . 

Oh sloth, sloth, that is definitely  me on days off
I am physically totally inactive, so guilty of doing nothing, NOTHING
Loving my respite from work, guilty of snail behaviour ~
Lazy and idle as a snail, that is me on days off from my high stress job
Just love the stillness of home, the tranquility of nothingness
A lover of sleep    a dreamer of dreams and dreams    sweet serenity . . . 

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January 20, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/My Seven "Deadly" Sins
Copyright Protected, ID 16747-496-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym. 

For the contest, The Deadly Sins, 
sponsor, John Lawless 

Third Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/9/2016 11:15:00 AM
Congrats well written x good work x Wendy
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:54:00 AM
Wendy, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment ~
Date: 2/8/2016 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations BW!!! :)
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Date: 2/8/2016 9:46:00 AM
Hans, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate !!! :)
Date: 2/7/2016 3:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:59:00 PM
Susan, thanks for visiting and the congratulations ~
Date: 2/7/2016 10:56:00 AM
nice win
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:00:00 PM
Linda, thanks for visiting, appreciate ~
Date: 2/7/2016 10:02:00 AM
Hi Broken Wings, back again to congratulate you on your win! Like I said below, I loved your take on the theme. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:02:00 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment and the hugs ~
Date: 2/7/2016 9:18:00 AM
Very descriptive write on each of the sins - I like the positive and negative sides you have penned - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:02:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the compliments and the congrats and the hugs !
Date: 2/7/2016 9:11:00 AM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your placement in this one. A job well done, ciao friend!
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:03:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations on for the compliment, appreciate ~
Date: 2/7/2016 8:45:00 AM
Way to go BW. I found this a very creative interpretation of the theme and a wonderful presentation of the Yin/Yang of the seven. Thanks for you participation in this contest.
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:05:00 PM
John, thanks for the great contest, and my fine placement, I am honored ~
Date: 1/22/2016 8:03:00 AM
Very descriptive write, BW. I like the way you begin each stanza.
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Date: 1/23/2016 12:17:00 AM
James, thanks for the visit and the compliment ~
Date: 1/22/2016 12:18:00 AM
that's fantastic, the way you used the word, excellent write BW, best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 1/22/2016 5:42:00 AM
Sage, thanks for the fantastic and the excellent, I love those words !
Date: 1/20/2016 6:23:00 PM
Very well done, so thorough, we are all guilty and sometimes it is a good thing. hugs xx
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Date: 1/20/2016 6:28:00 PM
Casarah, thanks for visiting, if we were all perfect it would be a dull dull life for sure, we have to be guilty of something sometimes, and thanks for the hugs ~
Date: 1/20/2016 6:18:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, I just love your take on this theme! You have shown the other side, the good in the 'seven deadly' when used as stimulus or reward for doing good, and how to walk away when not for good. Best wishes for the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/20/2016 6:22:00 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for visiting and for the 7 and the hugs !
Date: 1/20/2016 5:07:00 PM
Lovely and I have had and continue to suffer from all listed! Am glad you can write your feelings with such veracity! I seem to be only able to write when I am happy. . .
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Date: 1/20/2016 6:21:00 PM
Thomas, thanks for the lovely, I can write happy or sad but I write my very very best when sad and especially when hurt, I go deep deep inside my soul at those times ~
Date: 1/20/2016 2:19:00 PM
Oh I suffered them all myself when we can see them it's then we know what love truly is excellent piece of writing in an interesting style beautifully painted wishing you a blessed day
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Date: 1/20/2016 2:44:00 PM
Liam, thank you so much for visiting my poem with that nice comment, I love that beautifully painted phrase !

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