Get Your Premium Membership

My Seven ''Deadly'' Sins

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Oh pride, pride, I do have pride Pride of my country, pride in my siblings, and my nephews and niece I am proud of me too, I am a survivor, proud of every single word that I pen ~ Think, if one had zero pride what would we be So, to me a certain amount of pride is okay Cloud my judgement not head up in every downfall able to stand proud . . Oh greed, greed, it can be excessive The need for material things, such as money, cars, symbols of wealth I work hard so I can live in this nice Victorian apartment ~ Have food to eat, even indulged in a big screen television Does that mean greed? No simply, rewards for hard work An always seeking putting things before this life the need is endless . . . Oh lust, lust, that sweet desire for love and power Within each of us is this need to love and to be loved, to have For me lust is fine as long as it is two-sided ~ Not directed at someone who does not return the love. That is just unnatural, and the need for power, being number one is wrong Oh I recall him the deep love and sweet passion at his tomb I weep . . . Oh anger, anger, that wrath that involves many feelings It is a useless emotional response, a hurt We feel violated and it triggers the fight brain response ~ Wanting revenge with hasty and sudden responses Thankfully in my life, I just walk away Negative feelings silence poison pen gossip I just turn away . . . Oh gluttony, gluttony, over-indulgence Guilty at Christmastime for sure, I over did it at dinner And I did gulp down that box of chocolates given as a gift ~ But that is not everyday and I do give food to the poor Well maybe me and my friend did gulp down buttered popcorn at the movies I saw a man lost and gave him my chicken meal I had more at home . . . Oh envy, envy, you green eyed monster If it creates hate that is bad but it can create striving to be better Make one want to be better, do better, accomplish more ~ To envy and admire another is fine, but to want to topple them so wrong Go about making a plan on how to defeat them, is wrong, wrong Outdo and undo deep emotional thoughts be happy with you . . . Oh sloth, sloth, that is definitely me on days off I am physically totally inactive, so guilty of doing nothing, NOTHING Loving my respite from work, guilty of snail behaviour ~ Lazy and idle as a snail, that is me on days off from my high stress job Just love the stillness of home, the tranquility of nothingness A lover of sleep a dreamer of dreams and dreams sweet serenity . . . ___________________________ January 20, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/My Seven "Deadly" Sins Copyright Protected, ID 16747-496-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, The Deadly Sins, sponsor, John Lawless Third Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/9/2016 11:15:00 AM
Congrats well written x good work x Wendy
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/9/2016 11:54:00 AM
Wendy, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment ~
Date: 2/8/2016 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations BW!!! :)
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2016 9:46:00 AM
Hans, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate !!! :)
Date: 2/7/2016 3:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2016 4:59:00 PM
Susan, thanks for visiting and the congratulations ~
Date: 2/7/2016 10:56:00 AM
nice win
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2016 5:00:00 PM
Linda, thanks for visiting, appreciate ~
Date: 2/7/2016 10:02:00 AM
Hi Broken Wings, back again to congratulate you on your win! Like I said below, I loved your take on the theme. Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2016 5:02:00 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment and the hugs ~
Date: 2/7/2016 9:18:00 AM
Very descriptive write on each of the sins - I like the positive and negative sides you have penned - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2016 5:02:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the compliments and the congrats and the hugs !
Date: 2/7/2016 9:11:00 AM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your placement in this one. A job well done, ciao friend!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2016 5:03:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations on for the compliment, appreciate ~
Date: 2/7/2016 8:45:00 AM
Way to go BW. I found this a very creative interpretation of the theme and a wonderful presentation of the Yin/Yang of the seven. Thanks for you participation in this contest.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2016 5:05:00 PM
John, thanks for the great contest, and my fine placement, I am honored ~
Date: 1/22/2016 8:03:00 AM
Very descriptive write, BW. I like the way you begin each stanza.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/23/2016 12:17:00 AM
James, thanks for the visit and the compliment ~
Date: 1/22/2016 12:18:00 AM
that's fantastic, the way you used the word, excellent write BW, best of luck in the contest...
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/22/2016 5:42:00 AM
Sage, thanks for the fantastic and the excellent, I love those words !
Date: 1/20/2016 6:23:00 PM
Very well done, so thorough, we are all guilty and sometimes it is a good thing. hugs xx
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 6:28:00 PM
Casarah, thanks for visiting, if we were all perfect it would be a dull dull life for sure, we have to be guilty of something sometimes, and thanks for the hugs ~
Date: 1/20/2016 6:18:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, I just love your take on this theme! You have shown the other side, the good in the 'seven deadly' when used as stimulus or reward for doing good, and how to walk away when not for good. Best wishes for the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 6:22:00 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for visiting and for the 7 and the hugs !
Date: 1/20/2016 5:07:00 PM
Lovely and I have had and continue to suffer from all listed! Am glad you can write your feelings with such veracity! I seem to be only able to write when I am happy. . .
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 6:21:00 PM
Thomas, thanks for the lovely, I can write happy or sad but I write my very very best when sad and especially when hurt, I go deep deep inside my soul at those times ~
Date: 1/20/2016 2:19:00 PM
Oh I suffered them all myself when we can see them it's then we know what love truly is excellent piece of writing in an interesting style beautifully painted wishing you a blessed day
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 2:44:00 PM
Liam, thank you so much for visiting my poem with that nice comment, I love that beautifully painted phrase !

Book: Reflection on the Important Things