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Once upon a time in a lush valley surrounded by whispering woods the villagers of Happiness lived in blissful peace. Their days were filled with laughter, their nights graced by gentle lullabies of the wind. The land was generous, yielding bountiful harvests, and the villagers shared everything in harmony.

Until one day, a shadow crept over the valley. A mysterious figure cloaked in twilight, emerged from the forest. The villagers curious and unafraid welcomed the stranger with open arms offering shelter and warmth. But as night fell, the stranger revealed her true nature.

This is a fairy tale and my favorite fairy tale about Mirmantha. She has many names one being Lillith, you may have heard of Lillith the first woman in the world, but that's another story!  Dedicated to Zenzele. Hope you enjoy —I Am Anaya

 

 

What once was a peaceful delightful place 
Joyful and friendly creatures in God’s grace
A stunning morning a soulful sunrise
A village heaven has gifted a prize
The most grandiose of rainbow arches
The villagers spirited because March is
The time for pleasant picnics by the rill
Fishing for mackerel over the hill
But then suddenly much to their surprise
Something lurks beyond fearing their demise
Peering through branches of an apple tree
Hides a reptilian, set loose set free
The happy ones, stood only one feet tall 
Young and old, all for one and one for all
Rising, chanting and ready now to face
Whatever it is that threatens their place
Eyes wide, languid, bulging green with envy
It sickens her their gaiety, their bravery 
She wrenched herself free from one prickly elf 
Lurched up and away and said to herself
Pathetic ne’er do wells ha, I’ll show you!
As your queen, now forget all you once knew
As she smiled with demonic delight
Plucked an apple, with jaws wide took a bite 
Then with her fingers splayed out before her
Strokes the top of a cage strapped with leather    
Inside the cage a snake hissing, coiling
Petraiota she whispers toiling
Her rattler a pit viper diamondback
My sweet Petra I have your rabbit snack
They scurry off into eastern woodlands
Patiently await their leader's commands
The villigites camping out waiting near
No more fun…no more frivolity…hear! 
No more enlightenment hear me fools!
No individualism and no more schools!
Several days and nights, whining ensues
The voice echoed through walls over the land
A thunderous voice, went on and on, and
on, yapping out laws too bizarre for them
She condemns as she rages spewing phlegm 
Make an appearance!  Show yourself mammoth!
To display harm on this day of Sabbath
A villager yells come out!  I demand!
It gives him chills, the hair on his arm stand 
Next he espies a she-devil tree high
Frightened the villagers freeze, petrified
She must be five feet ten!  Wait!  keep your hide!
Arms folded, head tilted, her lips pressed tight 
The villagers stay in spite, intense fright
I‘m in control now, I will crush you and
what I say goes, I assure you, it stands
If you annoy me, I’ll let Petra loose!
Most venomous you’ll 'ov wished for a noose
Giant hands and feet, a freak of nature
Abomination of Norse literature
Her words hammered into them as they swayed
Fear of being crushed, bitten, they obeyed 
Mirmantha is the name given to her
Like a sea creature slimy and slender
We must follow then one interrupted
Programed to hate each other, corrupted
But all along creatures of the night watched
Saw how the other one's plans were blotched
Hiding in places where night creatures hide 
Plans to rid Mirmantha, stand at high tide
The serpent to mate with Petra is strong
A net and a ribbed canoe six feet long
The creatures of the night have succeeded!
Creatures of the night, were all they needed 
Mirmantha is trapped and rowed far away
Night creatures will be remembered on this day
Without Petra her once dangerous snake
No longer mayhem and make no mistake
Now deprogramed and happy once again
Good riddance sung, mean-spirited titan

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Date: 10/21/2022 11:41:00 PM
This poem is like a good book, I could not stop reading it. It has expanded my horizons. Great job.
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Date: 10/22/2022 5:24:00 PM
Hi Wayne Smith. I am glad you enjoyed. Thank you for the kind words and comments! I Am Anaya
Date: 6/10/2022 8:11:00 AM
A scary tale you've written today, Anaya Good entry for the contest, good luck. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 6/10/2022 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Bill, I appreciate the act of kindness you are doing for your fellow poets (by commenting generously)...Anaya
Date: 6/10/2022 3:38:00 AM
I'm on Lilith's side...ignorant villagers.
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Date: 6/10/2022 6:57:00 PM
Lilith the first feminist ever!
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Date: 6/10/2022 5:59:00 PM
Adam was no match for Lilu...M'Lady Lilith continues to serve as source material in today's popular culture, Western culture, literature, occultism, fantasy, and horror, often depicted as a woman fighting for equality and striving for fairness...BUT my SHE-DEVIL is the true source of all evil-The moral of the story is...IT ONLY TAKES ONE person to inflict MAYHEM
Date: 6/8/2022 11:59:00 PM
A very fascinating story ! Your imagination is wonderful, Anaya ! Thank God, the villagers were able to restore their calm and deport the witch like Mirmantha from their land...
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Date: 6/10/2022 6:04:00 PM
They are happy as usual Valsa, let's hope she doesn't come back any time soon! She needs to pick on someone her own size...; )Anaya
Date: 6/8/2022 7:15:00 PM
Your defiant air is both haunting and plaintiff, stellar with no strained formality. Attractively whimsical! Robert
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Date: 6/8/2022 7:17:00 PM
Well, thank you for your affectionate admiration...a little fantasy I put together! Anaya
Date: 6/7/2022 10:47:00 PM
There was a time when I was fascinated by stories in the series of Swords and Sorceress. This resembles this style. I wrote a few poems on this type but I don't know when I'll ever post them. Your poem is well detailed and has a great ending.
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Date: 6/8/2022 12:55:00 PM
Victor, I delve into fantasies, not much experience writing, but it was Caren (CK) who inspired this. Maybe you can post one of yours, many like me love the sorceress, for e.g...Lady Death a fave of mine, I wrote about her in my poem...Hellboy Meets....Thank you!

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