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Four Cafe's Poetry Contest

2nd Place

 

 

Four Cafes

January’s snow flows stealthfully through my fifth-floor apartment window, flung wide open to welcome in the new year.  The half-drawn curtains bellow with brisk salt air blowing in from the North Sea.  A distant foghorn groans in a resigned, forlorn resonance, guiding ships braving the churning, ice-slushy waters as church bells strike twelve stately brassy tones.
	
This night I stand alone and content, a rich cup of espresso in my hand.  Eschewing nostalgia and perhaps too sober of thought, I prefer my pleasures to be of the vicarious variety.  Beneath me I take in the muted ambers and oranges spread out from the four cafes, out past the cobblestone road, glistening as snowflakes alite.  Young couples drinking, glasses clinking, hug, kiss and revel, strolling out from the cafes.  Some indulge in a traditional waltz, before the speaker blares more modern fare.  Waves of laughter and singing ebb and flow as I turn and head toward my bed and blessed sleep.
	
Again the foghorn blares mournfully, like a tuba vainly pleading to be united with a long-lost orchestra.
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Congratulations on your 2nd place win , Robert.
Gorelick Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 5:29 PM
Thank you, Alfonso II! Robert
Agustin Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Gorelick Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 5:29 PM
God bless you too, Beata, thank you. Robert
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 4:47 PM
Love the imagery in this Robert. Congratulations on your win! :)
Gorelick Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 5:30 PM
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the imagery! Robert
Anaya Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations Robert on your 2nd place win in a first [Prose Contest] on here!!! Magnificent is the word for your wonderful flights of fancy. Sadly my attempt was edited too many times and well I am happy for you! ~Anaya
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 3:48 PM
Thank you for being so magnanimous! You're a good sport and a good person. Cheers, Robert
Kauffman Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive Robert. Congratulations on your win.
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Thank you, Sam! Appreciate your visit and comment. Robert
Peck Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Your poem is so full of colors and energy, it's a joy to read! Congratulations!
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, for the congratulations and comment! Robert
Ward Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 2:17 AM
An atmospheric beauty, Robert. Well done for its inclusion in my winner's list.
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 9:22 AM
Thank you so much Julia, I had a tremendous time with my flights of fancy. Your contest generated a mood of deep reflection! Robert
Tor Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 6:55 PM
Robert this is another favorite you set the mood perfectly with magnificent words that just reach in your being and put you in a special place with special moments shared. POTD material for sure...
Gorelick Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 12:28 PM
I missed this one, sorry mate, I appreciate the wonderful comment, Michael. Hope you are doing well. My best, Robert
Nuwas Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 11:38 PM
Enjoyed reading this poem.
Gorelick Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Thank you for your generous response. Robert
Rolland Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 7:20 PM
beutiful poetry, i lOved the atmosphere, drinking a cup of coffee, thanks a lot yann
Gorelick Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Thank you, Yann! Robert
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