Notes About The Poem

Erotic Love Overflowing


       aching     blazing     
ceaseless desire-
erotic    fathomless    greedy     heavenly 
incomparable     jubilant keening love  
     magically nurturing
          overflowing      penetrating
quivering ~
      rapturous 
           sublime throbbing unparalleled-
velvety           wanton
      xade yearning           zig-a-zag-ah



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September 22, 2015


ABC


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Note:

xade is a French adjective for ultimate perfection, as in a beautiful man
zig-a-zag-ah is from the Urban Dictionary meaning to enjoy oneself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 9/25/2015 10:37:00 PM
A tantalizing poem that encompasses the senses Constance. Beautiful! 7
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Date: 9/24/2015 12:07:00 PM
I really like the flow....and xade is something new I know....not really sure if I learned it before....I never got to practice my French now I remember those words no more....lol....and I got awards for French....lol
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Date: 9/23/2015 2:52:00 PM
Great write BW. Intensity growing.
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Date: 9/23/2015 8:53:00 AM
This is a brilliant entry Constance :) good luck for the contest with this beauty!
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Date: 9/23/2015 7:12:00 AM
A beautiful sensual use of the form and also visually pleasing.
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Date: 9/23/2015 3:38:00 AM
Wow breathtaking abc thats steamy hot... !~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 9/22/2015 6:40:00 PM
This is beautifully constructed BW. Good luck in the contest..........A.M.
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Date: 9/22/2015 6:33:00 PM
She said x would be hard but you found a way..well done
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Date: 9/22/2015 3:46:00 PM
The last part makes me smile. Never heard of it till now. Very nicely constructed, BW! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/22/2015 3:45:00 PM
Best of luck in the contest. I think I need a cigarette
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Date: 9/22/2015 1:56:00 PM
Thermal subject injected with hot words in alphabetical order...You got it, Broken. All the best! hugs!
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Date: 9/22/2015 1:03:00 PM
Ooh very nice, I can feel this one, Great write, good luck in the contest
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