Erotic Love Overflowing

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aching blazing ceaseless desire- erotic fathomless greedy heavenly incomparable jubilant keening love magically nurturing overflowing penetrating quivering ~ rapturous sublime throbbing unparalleled- velvety wanton xade yearning zig-a-zag-ah ____________________ September 22, 2015 ABC _____________________ Note: xade is a French adjective for ultimate perfection, as in a beautiful man zig-a-zag-ah is from the Urban Dictionary meaning to enjoy oneself

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/25/2015 10:37:00 PM

A tantalizing poem that encompasses the senses Constance. Beautiful! 7

Eric Boddie

Date: 9/24/2015 12:07:00 PM

I really like the flow....and xade is something new I know....not really sure if I learned it before....I never got to practice my French now I remember those words no more....lol....and I got awards for French....lol