Butterfly Whispers

The golden sun of yesterday played out in fields of gold inside the tarping memory of father, handling LIFE the joyful whistles that he fluted pruned alongside vines and mothers pumping heart of song lauding in loud and STRONG No treason yet no aging bridge no tented hope just morning glories, a baby breath away from here and all the sunlight we'd afford inside a little yard of sweet explore, I see, the lonely eyes of a young girl longing for a friend a hand held jar for fireflies or butterflies in toe Pebbles rolled beneath unpaved paths as dear together raw as butterflies we scabbed our knees with swivel, in the morning breeze Like BUTTERFLIES preluding dawn with shiant colors bold, the summer sun of yesterday played out in fields of gold; Inside my hiding place a youthful carefree life still lingers in my heart's enfold, without the memory, of growing old. Jan 19, 2019 Sponsor: Emile Pinet Contest: Free Verse Style Only
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Anish Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Beautiful "shape" poem here!! Best of the season to you and yours - and keep writing verse!! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lindley Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations my great friend on this very fine poem being honored with POTD honors here at the Soup....
B. Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 10:55 PM
A belated Congratulations on your POTD, Pixie.. An inspiring and beautiful free verse.. So enchanting and magical, my friend.. A fave for me!! Many blessings..
Wolf Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 1:52 PM
What a beautiful write, Vie! Just made my morning. Best of luck to you
One Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 4:19 AM
Lovely poem, fully deserving of POTD..
Raven Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Hi Pixie, dropping back with my congratulations on your well-deserved Poem Of The Day honour with this wonderful write. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Nicole Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 7:12 PM
This touches my heart so deeply. Life lingers as it should- and we caress time, it is more like time holds each of us. Older the days are and so we become like sand drifting in an hourglass. Memories of beautiful moments, of days before- will always be a part of us. This is beautiful. Congratulations Pixie, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Doll Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Pixie, Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Warrior Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 6:14 PM
Way to go Pix...lovely verse...Congrats!!! on POTD!...love & light...^WW^
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 6:06 PM
Hello Pixie, congratulations on POTD Hugs
Haight Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Pixie, such a lovely poem! Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honor! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Pixie, congratulations on having your beautiful poem selected as POTD, enjoy the honor ~
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 1:06 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Pixie ... it is so beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Hi Pixie Dust, This is just beautiful! Great message as well. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Wanter Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Just beautiful! And so touching. Congratulations.
Gentile Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 9:34 AM
This is such a beautiful write Pixie Dust, Congratulations on your POTD xxoo
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 9:16 AM
Great one ! Congratulations for POTD :)
Michael Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Inside and outside your hiding place....Congratulations Pixie...you are forever young...
Pandit Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the day, Pixie.
Messina Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Lovely Dixie, beautiful write! Congratulations on POTD
May Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Congrats on POTD Pixie..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Lovely poem Pixie, I especially love the way you closed. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
Smith Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 6:39 AM
Lovely write, Pixie, congratulations...
May Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 5:20 AM
Back again Pixie Congratulations my friend on POTD
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January 21, 2019 at 4:53 AM
It's wonderful to start the day with "Butterfly Whispers"! A brilliant poem enlivening the soul and awakening the heart.. Congratulations, Pixie, on your POTD! A well earned acknowledgement! Best regards and Blessings.
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