Get Your Premium Membership

Butterfly Whispers

The golden sun of yesterday played out in fields of gold inside the tarping memory of father, handling LIFE the joyful whistles that he fluted pruned alongside vines and mothers pumping heart of song lauding in loud and STRONG No treason yet no aging bridge no tented hope just morning glories, a baby breath away from here and all the sunlight we'd afford inside a little yard of sweet explore, I see, the lonely eyes of a young girl longing for a friend a hand held jar for fireflies or butterflies in toe Pebbles rolled beneath unpaved paths as dear together raw as butterflies we scabbed our knees with swivel, in the morning breeze Like BUTTERFLIES preluding dawn with shiant colors bold, the summer sun of yesterday played out in fields of gold; Inside my hiding place a youthful carefree life still lingers in my heart's enfold, without the memory, of growing old. Jan 19, 2019 Sponsor: Emile Pinet Contest: Free Verse Style Only

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 12/24/2019 8:52:00 AM
Beautiful "shape" poem here!! Best of the season to you and yours - and keep writing verse!! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Login to Reply
Date: 1/31/2019 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations my great friend on this very fine poem being honored with POTD honors here at the Soup....
Login to Reply
Date: 1/25/2019 10:55:00 PM
A belated Congratulations on your POTD, Pixie.. An inspiring and beautiful free verse.. So enchanting and magical, my friend.. A fave for me!! Many blessings..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/25/2019 1:52:00 PM
What a beautiful write, Vie! Just made my morning. Best of luck to you
Login to Reply
Date: 1/22/2019 4:19:00 AM
Lovely poem, fully deserving of POTD..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 7:21:00 PM
Hi Pixie, dropping back with my congratulations on your well-deserved Poem Of The Day honour with this wonderful write. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 7:12:00 PM
This touches my heart so deeply. Life lingers as it should- and we caress time, it is more like time holds each of us. Older the days are and so we become like sand drifting in an hourglass. Memories of beautiful moments, of days before- will always be a part of us. This is beautiful. Congratulations Pixie, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Pixie, Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 6:14:00 PM
Way to go Pix...lovely verse...Congrats!!! on POTD!...love & light...^WW^
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 6:06:00 PM
Hello Pixie, congratulations on POTD Hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 4:58:00 PM
Pixie, such a lovely poem! Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honor! Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 3:53:00 PM
Pixie, congratulations on having your beautiful poem selected as POTD, enjoy the honor ~
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 1:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Pixie ... it is so beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 10:08:00 AM
Hi Pixie Dust, This is just beautiful! Great message as well. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 9:35:00 AM
Just beautiful! And so touching. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 9:34:00 AM
This is such a beautiful write Pixie Dust, Congratulations on your POTD xxoo
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 9:16:00 AM
Great one ! Congratulations for POTD :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 8:48:00 AM
Inside and outside your hiding place....Congratulations Pixie...you are forever young...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 8:14:00 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the day, Pixie.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 8:10:00 AM
Lovely Dixie, beautiful write! Congratulations on POTD
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 7:58:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Pixie..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 7:45:00 AM
Lovely poem Pixie, I especially love the way you closed. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 6:39:00 AM
Lovely write, Pixie, congratulations...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 5:20:00 AM
Back again Pixie Congratulations my friend on POTD
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2019 4:53:00 AM
It's wonderful to start the day with "Butterfly Whispers"! A brilliant poem enlivening the soul and awakening the heart.. Congratulations, Pixie, on your POTD! A well earned acknowledgement! Best regards and Blessings.
Login to Reply
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things