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For Sotto Poet's Babel, Bait, Blame, Blank Check poetry contest.

 

A man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame somebody else. John Burroughs
This is not a sad poem, but my hungry hands hunger to express, as autumn brings back haunting hues, stinging my sleeping soul. All I hear is melancholic tones, whistling in mercenary winds, lifting leaves from bare branches. Bright colours turning grisly grey, as the season of death, creates a grave full of misery. I cannot forever criticise ghosts, nor refuse to visit your tomb. As each petal slowly fades, I'm too tired to accuse or be accused. I've formed into a personified weeping willow, releasing rivers of bitterness through raindrops. In my nakedness, I resemble their withering woes, trying to smile, composing a suicide of emotions, dangling, distracting from that which is real, but my muteness is literally slaying my pain. Why am I always the one to blame? I do not feel safe in the angst of Autumn, for my essence is not eternally evergreen. I'm fatigued from those who claim to love me, unable to save me from sinking into seas of sorrow. My selfish friends are like silent marionettes, nowhere to be seen nor heard, abandoning me in the darkest corner, despite my pen pouring like October rain. Maybe this is a sad poem, as I still search for forgiveness. I keep the faith that my roots will bloom again, because I am a vibrant child of summer, yearning for the return of colouration. Adapting to living without answers.

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Date: 4/11/2024 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 4/7/2024 9:45:00 AM
One that resonates with, a colossal amount of energy blame depletes. May be best not to search the Universe for answers, the evidence we are looking for is “experienced” -forgiving ourselves. The comparison to the weeping willow is stunning. Sunshine wishes ~Anaya Beautiful poetry, Silent.
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Date: 4/5/2024 7:04:00 PM
despite my pen pouring like October rain. What an original line amongst so many other brilliant ones, S, gl in the contest dear friend :)
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Date: 4/5/2024 1:25:00 PM
Human nature, I have come to learn, is mostly self centered. People will up and leave you, except for a very select few, when you need them the most. For introverts its especially difficult. I empathize with on this one
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Date: 4/4/2024 4:00:00 PM
Dear SO, this is such a beautiful, oceanic deep and haunting poem. I love your poetry, your poetic heart, your generous, unselfish support you give to so many and you so deserve all that support back too. There are so many emotions of many layers and yet you so poetically and skilfully bring them to the surface to share your heart with your readers. Such profound soul searching and poignant questions that may or cannot be answered. The sense of worldly weariness here is very strong as you ask
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Date: 4/4/2024 4:05:00 PM
the meaningful question, ‘ Why am I to blame?’ But, there is hope in the last stanza as the quest goes on but also acceptance that there isn’t always an answer to be found or given. This read is very touching dear SO from your beautiful, soulful poetic pen. Hugs and blessings to you :)
Date: 4/4/2024 1:00:00 AM
Fragile vulnerable deep from within.. Your being so busy does not prevent you from pouring October rain treasures from a heart that yearns to bring to life the slumbering life in others. It's as if you carve through stone to reveal the beating hearts within. Words alone cannot touch hearts, but healing motives can be tender, empathetic, with hearts that are tender to the touch, bruised by many hurts. Misunderstood, means blamed. I relate deeply. Soul searching. ((Warm Hugs)) Aqua M
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Date: 4/3/2024 8:24:00 PM
Dear SO,I read your poem with a heavy heart, feeling the weight of your words. Autumn's melancholic tones seem to echo through your verses, creating a picture of your inner turmoil. Remember, blaming yourself or others doesn't bring peace; it only adds to the burden. Allow yourself to feel, but also know that healing begins with forgiveness, both for yourself and others. You're not alone in your journey, and brighter days will come. Keep holding onto hope, like the promise of spring after winter's chill.With empathy, Blessings my Friend! - Daniel
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Date: 4/3/2024 5:55:00 PM
I empathize with your thoughts in this find poem and hope friends like me will rally around you and help you know your eminence worth to worth lives. Soup mail me if you need someone to talk to. I want to be there for you. Bill
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Date: 4/3/2024 5:52:00 PM
You seem to be a very deep and passionate person, Silent One. I know from my own experience that those deep thoughts and feelings can be exhilarating or take me to the deepest woe. We can wonder why life is as it is and why our individual experience of it can be so depressing, why our hearts struggle for answers that seem to never come, as our hearts break. We sometimes can be too much a perfectionist and want perfect answers and want life to be perfect. Surrender to Love is the only answer.
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Date: 4/3/2024 10:52:00 AM
I think Silent one, that most often we can blame oneself for how we feel. Taking responsibility for one's feelings is more difficult than it may seem. Your lines so deeply and poetically express that struggle for me. Well done!!
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Date: 4/3/2024 1:57:00 AM
You are so adept at creating imagery. we often blame others and forget we should blame ourselves. Great poetry.
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Date: 4/2/2024 7:28:00 PM
Isn't blame meant to shame? Don't take ownership of it, from that refrain. Others may view you in disdain, but unless you are guilty please abstain! Another lovely piece that takes us through the emotional depths. I think blame is only for people who don't see the magnitude of their errors.
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Date: 4/2/2024 10:30:00 AM
My selfish friends are like silent marionettes, nowhere to be seen nor heard! Keep speaking your heart. Though I know you are not religious (out of compassion because I do believe) you can find forgiveness in Christ. Just know I am a friend or I wouldn’t say this at all. Just know us poets love you and wrap our arms around you. Love your poetry dear Silent.
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Date: 4/2/2024 5:54:00 AM
Silent One, So much packed into this poem. It takes a deep dive into the intricate web of emotions, painting a picture of inner turmoil and the quest for self-understanding. It's a raw expression of vulnerability. Your words resonate deeply, reflecting a journey of introspection and the enduring spirit that seeks solace and growth even in the midst of uncertainty and pain. Cheers, Don
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Date: 4/2/2024 3:25:00 AM
The first line gave me closure. The entire poem gave me comfort, is it strange? That I fancy sad and dark alot? I just knew it was sad piece and I wanted to dive deep. "I'm too tired to accuse or be accused. I've formed into a personified weeping willow." This line got me. Lovely piece.
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2024 3:30:00 AM
I dont think it is strange.. I always drift towards the sad and dark also... Thanks for your constant support.
Date: 4/1/2024 10:45:00 PM
this is so dark, but i can relate to your words, poet, you found the right tone and emotion, you have essential verses, i quote I'm too tired to accuse or be accused. My selfish friends are like silent marionettes, this is a precious poem to be kept and read forever, thanks
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Date: 4/1/2024 9:05:00 PM
This is a very sad poem in content and tone. To be always blamed by others for no potent reason is so disheartening. It drives one into a kind of disconsolateness. I see so many powerful lines here...."I'm fatigued from those who claim to love me, unable to save me from sinking into seas of sorrow. My selfish friends are like silent marionettes, nowhere to be seen nor heard, abandoning me in the darkest corner,". This I feel is the lament of one with a bleeding heart. Yet the poem concludes on a note of hope...I keep the faith that my roots will bloom again, because I am a vibrant child of summer, yearning for the return of colouration. Adapting to living without answers." Yes, man.... take up the challenge and start living in hope. Excellent penning!
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Date: 4/1/2024 2:08:00 PM
A psychologically deep poem, it resonates with unfounded guilt and self-blame. "Adapting to living without answers" summed the poem in the last line. It perfects with wisdom.
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Date: 4/1/2024 11:40:00 AM
Symphony of emotions throughout, SO---in forlorn words of introspection, echoing of past. ---I resemble their withering woes, trying to smile, composing a suicide of emotions, dangling, distracting from that which is real, but my muteness is literally slaying my pain---quite reflective!
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Date: 4/1/2024 9:37:00 AM
I don't see you as a vibrant child of summer; however, I appreciate the beautiful lines in your poem.
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Silent One
Date: 4/1/2024 9:55:00 AM
A vibrant child of summer is a good thing...lol
Date: 4/1/2024 9:30:00 AM
My selfish friends are the same, but theres too many selfish ones in this world but the ones that remain silent and patient are the ones to take the blame. And we wonder, why are we the ones always to take the blame. Im at a point in my life too where i feel “ im too tired to accuse or be accused” done and dusted with half hearted smiles, and fakeness, i absolutely love the profound nature of your poem and your use of words and poetic techniques in this is impeccable! As always! Youv nailed it. Best wishes for the contest.
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