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All the Little Pieces

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" ---John Ruskin, 1853 Are being gathered by the Angels and presented to the Lord. They will be there at judgment time in all their shame or glory As evidence of my faithful adherence to His Word. Many times my life has crumbled and I’ve promised to do better. No changes can I make to deeds once done or words once said. The angels will not miss a single sliver of the remnants Of the goodness or the baseness in the earthly life I’ve led. God has a different measure than the judges of the world. He may deem my sin more evil than the murderer’s vile deed, If I have not loved my neighbor and have failed to feed His hungry Or been aware of his commandments and have simply failed to heed. My faithful parents taught me to be servant of the Lord. If I should fail it's not their fault but mine alone. And now I come to you Lord in tearful supplication Please forgive me for forgetting You and struggling on my own. You sent your Son to save us with admonition to believe, If we give to Him our burdens all our sins will be forgiven. With arrogance I tarried, thinking his help wasn’t needed, I had led a life so blameless, I could earn my way to Heaven. One of the Heavenly Beings who is gathering the pieces, Is my own Guardian Angel who has been with me always. He has shown me the pieces that were blacker than the others And are shouting of my failures and the error of my ways. Sins of omission there as well as dark sins of commission. I pray Lord that you strike them from my open book of Life. I beg before my sands run out that I may be forgiven And I come to you in glory when I leave this world of strife. By: Joyce Johnson 6/22/11 For Constance's contest "All the Little Pieces" won 4th place

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Date: 7/12/2016 11:26:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:49:00 PM
A beautiful write, Joyce! (If Jesus is your Savior, you've already been forgiven) Congrats on your placement in the contest!
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:25:00 AM
Joyce,, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
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Date: 6/27/2011 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 10:17:00 AM
Many congrats on both your wins, Joyce : )
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:17:00 AM
Your unshakeable faith shines through in this wonderful piece, Joyce. Many congrats on your WIN, Lainie
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Date: 6/25/2011 5:25:00 AM
So powerful Joyce and lovely as well. A masterpiece indeed. Many congrats for this win dear.
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:41:00 PM
amazing, joyce! perky congrats on your amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:29:00 PM
wow, Joyce, some very profound and very Wise words in this poem of yours. I especially liked what you said in stanzas three and four. I am guilty of not doing all I should and I don't think most people give it a second thought. Congrats. I am glad I finally saw this list so I could read this one.
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:08:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Joyce
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Date: 6/24/2011 4:34:00 PM
congrats on your win with this stunning entry, cory
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:50:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your win!!! always luv Michael
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:23:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on another fabulous winning poem so amazingly creative for the contest.. a wonderful treasure ..enjoy another great win my friend..luv..
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:19:00 PM
this entry was a joy to read, good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 6/22/2011 6:12:00 PM
I could GUSH over this prime rhyme! Girl, you got it goin' on! (Oye, that sounds odd considering its a faith poem :-) )I know that feeling of not making the final grade. We're all such a mess, aren't we? We are already forgiven, despite our struggleand failure to be more like HIM--at least most of us, but I think Mother Theresa was getting close I hope this places #1- in my eyes it already has. And for pete's sake, send to a Christian Mag--should be in PRINT ! An Early Congrats from Cyndi
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:26:00 PM
An excellent poem and great entry for the contest Joyce. All my best to you~ Caryl
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Date: 6/22/2011 11:36:00 AM
Beautiful words of inspiration..God Bless:)
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Date: 6/22/2011 10:55:00 AM
a well written and wonderful piece of poetry.
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